Mad Mother Me

Mad mother me.
I would shout "Paratroopers"
if a mass exodus from the heated house
was in operation, where the heat might escape. 
So my daughters would know not to loiter in the doorway.

Mad mother me.
If asked to drive into town at 5pm
I would stamp and shout about traffic cahos.
Even though we live in a small town.
Crawling in traffic was obviously not my thing.

Mad mother me.
I would rant and rave how beautiful their hair was.
Only for them to go and get it thinned out.
So they could attach those expensive hair extensions.
And they thought I was mad??

Mad mother me.
I would procure alcohol in the form of cans of beer.
For my underage drinking, prinking (pre drinking) daughters.
In the hope that in my watching them consume, they would presume
enough was enough, so no more allowed...outside.

Mad mother me.
I would bring them to the G.P.
When they asked me to help them obtain the pill,
to clear up their acne, if you will. Knowing in my heart
after a year with their partner, they were bound to start...

Mad mother me.
I hope in future they will see.
How much love my heart has poured from me.
To give them the best start in life ahead.
And to know if I could have loved them more, I would.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 5:22 PM
You did an amazing job bring up these three beauties Jean. In my mind you are extremely sensible regarding the alcohol and the pill which could cause all sorts of 'accidents' I hope they are appreciative of everything you have done for them:-) hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 3:53 PM
oh wow Jean I am so so delighted for you - it was the proudest day of my life when my son got his degree:-) hugs jan xx
Murray Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 5:33 PM
Hi Jan. I am fit to burst with pride tonight. My middle child Cora was conferred with a Masters in Health Psychology in Galway University today. The eldest Edna, has a Masters in Health Economics. So I tell Rena, in her final year degree in English and Sociology, her Masters will have to be in Health English.
Breedt Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 2:21 AM
In all your writing your personality jumps off the pages. You are always so upbeat and positive. Better keeps those daughters in check too. Thanks for the fun write. Youre not so mad at all.
Murray Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 3:28 AM
I am always ready for the next laugh Jannie. I can't believe myself how well our daughters have turned out. God is good.
James Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 12:51 PM
There is nothing mad about a mothers love...its limitless..great read tx
Murray Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 6:12 PM
Thank you James.
Wigley Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 2:10 AM
Patently obvious that you're parenting has been a roaring success, Jean, you should be very proud. Love your poem. Viv x
Murray Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 7:20 AM
I am proud as punch Viv.
Onclaud Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 12:47 PM
the madness of love rings through this page... children will always be cherished no mater what, jean... lovely write!..huggs
Murray Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 7:19 AM
Thank you Nette.
Callus Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 1:12 PM
I am sure that 'real' mothers want the best for their children, and they feel more protective when they are girls. Many fathers can be like that, too, but perhaps they don't show their feelings so openly. Those 3 girls (women) are beautiful; I hope they make you proud:) ~ Warm regards // paul
Murray Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 3:21 PM
I beam as I sit here Paul. Thank you for your wise words.
B. Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 4:56 PM
aww you can tell you sure love your girls. I really loved reading this piece :)
Murray Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 5:45 PM
Thank you Carol. It's the purest love there is.
Tomlin Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 4:06 PM
Heartwarming and humbling. Lovely.
Murray Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 4:15 PM
I see you jumped into my mad household when I was talking to San Steve. Pull up a chair. The kettle's on.
Murray Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 4:06 PM
Thank you San. It's been a fun run....most of the time.
Andresen Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 3:00 PM
- Three beautiful daughters, Jean :) - A good and loving mother - A lovely poem ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 2:47 AM
- A pleasure, Jean :)
Murray Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 4:05 PM
I lost the run of myself after saying to you what a mad mother I was about keeping the heat in the house. So, thank you Anne-Lise for being my inspiration this evening.
Godwin Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 2:44 PM
Good mother - you who made beautiful daughters! This poem will be globally, maternally understood and applauded. A fine job and well worth giving a copy to each daughter. Was I too soft? Was I too stern? All good mothers question themselves and at the end of the day, that makes them good mothers! Love this ... CayCay
Murray Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 4:02 PM
Thank you CayCay. All we can do is our best. On your suggestion, I must.
Smith Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 2:28 PM
You did a great job raising them Jean.
Murray Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 4:01 PM
Here's hoping Tim. Don't the say "Show me the child until they're seven and I'll show you the (wo)man"??
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