Mad Love Triangle

Yearnings so incredibly wide and deep yet stagnant in the zone of a brother charity and gifts, expect her to keep follows a route to the hands of another she leaves the newest car to chase a Jeep the third heart shockingly says don't bother thus, into another Life it wants to creep but gets responses as light as the feather these approaches serve as a badly timed raid receiving brutal defenses with no cure two guys and two ladies on a tight braid each so difficult even to procure every hopeful open heart is afraid the first guy, the last girl wants to secure.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Turner Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 12:54 PM
This is a great sonnet. I see heartache ahead. Peace my friend:)
Makama Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 10:34 AM
yes Daniel. Thank you so much.
Callus Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 8:23 AM
This is a tricky situation! Love triangles can cause much pain to all the parties concerned; there is no stopping temptation, but one can stop falling for temptation! I enjoyed this sonnet, Funom. ~ Regards // paul
Makama Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 10:34 AM
you are so right Paul. Thank you very much for your comment
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