Mad Love

Flash floods forecast hurrying steps and wheels ahead of foreboding clouds pregnant as eyelids welling with tears of baptismal rain to cleanse earth's skirt of its mire of blood and dust of blinding confusion with thunder of reproaches and flash of lightning clarity. I had been standing, switching gaze from red eye turning yellow to the traffic slowly rolling in one lane, in the next
a car came speeding forward unaware of the pedestrian, head down, hurrying into its path. In an instant making eternity: Rainbow splendor!

slow car swerving right
blocks car missing collision
saving the man's life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Gifford Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 11:16 PM
Hello Frances, a scary incident brilliantly written. Have a great day.
Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 1:43 PM
Whoa!! What a sight to behold. It is good that no one was injured. It could have been trajic. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
DiMino Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 6:39 AM
Excellent write! Into my favorites.
Schiavina Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 7:40 AM
Joe Thank you for your kind comment. Amazingly last week a car stopped in the middle of its left turn blocking incoming car and allowing me to cross safely.
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