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Flash floods forecast hurrying steps and wheels ahead of foreboding clouds pregnant as eyelids welling with tears of baptismal rain to cleanse earth's skirt of its mire of blood and dust of blinding confusion with thunder of reproaches and flash of lightning clarity. I had been standing, gaze switching from red eye turning yellow to the traffic slowly rolling in one lane, in the next a car came speeding forward unaware of the pedestrian, head down, hurrying into its path. In an instant making eternity: Rainbow splendor! slow car swerving right blocks car missing collision saving the man's life

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Date: 3/4/2023 1:43:00 PM
Whoa!! What a sight to behold. It is good that no one was injured. It could have been trajic. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 8/15/2021 6:39:00 AM
Excellent write! Into my favorites.
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Frances Schiavina
Date: 10/25/2021 7:40:00 AM
Joe Thank you for your kind comment. Amazingly last week a car stopped in the middle of its left turn blocking incoming car and allowing me to cross safely.

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