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Mesmerized by memorizing your moonshine madness And I know I’ve been stepped all over and it gets me pissed – still, wish you were mine Drenched in silence and guilt overflows, my sugar and wine – shame on me for falling for you crazily, you mad swine!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/24/2018 3:04:00 PM
J.W., I’m mesmerized by your anguish. Raw emotion so powerfully and artistically expressed. Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/25/2018 12:37:00 AM
Thank you, Susan :)
Date: 12/24/2018 1:25:00 PM
A quite despairing reflection of pain that I can identify with. Brave, dynamic, nicely delivered. Peace and rest, young man.
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Date: 12/25/2018 12:38:00 AM
Thank you, Lawrence! I will have a peaceable slumber tonight..

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