Notes About The Poem

Macrocosm

 The sky depicts the vast and massive cosmos,
lying in utter quiet and calm with an exosmose.
A little, joyful world is reflected in the sun's rays,
Supine in a bed of dew, a sleek tale sails the ways.

Space and the outer gauntlet are carved in the brain,
Earth has tied us to time, hiding in the hues of rain.
Light pours via trees, and calm flows on the breeze,
Life thrives in the trees, but you're scared to wheeze.

Mother Nature's life flows as sepia tones unfold,
Her thread feeds all life, from elfin buds to hold.
The sepia-colored soil weaves the life thread,
as deft views run from grave to cradle instead.

This microcosmic world springs into action,
Photons prompt electromagnetic reactions.
Every glance is a blessing to our soul's sight,
Soar freely in the midst of recurring plight.

Under a vacant aisle, the inner self may shred,
If Waltz and Tears Linger, Bliss and Pain Are Pled.
Detoxification is absent from the system's swing.
With the pulse of creation, I inhale an azure spring.

Ebbing into the river of life for the initial time,
Personally and in line with customary prime.
In a cosmic flow of microcosm and macrocosm,
As vectors are stout and wholes are sanctum. 

1st place contest winner

Written: March 18, 2023

Writing Challenge - 'M' Words - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

Word Chosen: 10-Macrocosm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kauffman Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 4:08 PM
Once again, Lassad, you regale us with brilliant imagery taking us on a journey into the "silence" and mystery of space. Beauty is captured in your words to shine like the first star of evening. Congratulations on your win! Easter blessings of joy to you dear friend!
La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 4:57 AM
Sotto, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Schiavina Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 12:50 PM
Masterfully done tapestry woven with poetry and bone of knowledge. Congratulations on top win.
Agustin Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 7:45 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.
Congratulations on your top win , Wonderful poem
Bangalee Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 3:09 AM
wonderful poetic writings; I enjoyed thoroughly; congrats for the placement
May Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 5:10 PM
Well penned Sotto, Congrats on your win
Andresen Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 10:30 AM
- A wonderful journey with your words, Las ... congratulations :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 9:40 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/story/picture. Have a great/blessed day writing away...........
Fowler Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 7:19 AM
Nice universe you've built here Las. Congratulations on your win! :)
Dutta Avatar
March 21, 2023 at 7:00 AM
Space and the outer gauntlet are carved in the brain……. In cosmic flow of microcosm and macrocosm,….. Wonderful. Big Congrats to win .
Rodrigues Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 12:14 PM
Mother Nature's life flows as sepia tones unfold, Her thread feeds all life, from elfin buds to hold… With the pulse of creation, I inhale an azure spring. Very nice, Lasaad!
Pandit Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 5:57 AM
Wonderfully journeying through the cosmos ---a poem of exploration, my friend.
Roper Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 6:37 PM
Great imagery and feeling. Enjoyed reading my friend. Good luck in the contest.
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