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The sky depicts the vast and massive cosmos, lying in utter quiet and calm with an exosmose. A little, joyful world is reflected in the sun's rays, Supine in a bed of dew, a sleek tale sails the ways. Space and the outer gauntlet are carved in the brain, Earth has tied us to time, hiding in the hues of rain. Light pours via trees, and calm flows on the breeze, Life thrives in the trees, but you're scared to wheeze. Mother Nature's life flows as sepia tones unfold, Her thread feeds all life, from elfin buds to hold. The sepia-colored soil weaves the life thread, as deft views run from grave to cradle instead. This microcosmic world springs into action, Photons prompt electromagnetic reactions. Every glance is a blessing to our soul's sight, Soar freely in the midst of recurring plight. Under a vacant aisle, the inner self may shred, If Waltz and Tears Linger, Bliss and Pain Are Pled. Detoxification is absent from the system's swing. With the pulse of creation, I inhale an azure spring. Ebbing into the river of life for the initial time, Personally and in line with customary prime. In a cosmic flow of microcosm and macrocosm, As vectors are stout and wholes are sanctum. 1st place contest winner Written: March 18, 2023 Writing Challenge - 'M' Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Word Chosen: 10-Macrocosm

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Date: 4/6/2023 4:08:00 PM
Once again, Lassad, you regale us with brilliant imagery taking us on a journey into the "silence" and mystery of space. Beauty is captured in your words to shine like the first star of evening. Congratulations on your win! Easter blessings of joy to you dear friend!
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Date: 4/3/2023 4:57:00 AM
Sotto, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 3/28/2023 12:50:00 PM
Masterfully done tapestry woven with poetry and bone of knowledge. Congratulations on top win.
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Date: 3/22/2023 7:45:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.
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Date: 3/22/2023 3:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win , Wonderful poem
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Date: 3/22/2023 3:09:00 AM
wonderful poetic writings; I enjoyed thoroughly; congrats for the placement
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Date: 3/21/2023 5:10:00 PM
Well penned Sotto, Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/21/2023 10:30:00 AM
- A wonderful journey with your words, Las ... congratulations :) - hugs
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Date: 3/21/2023 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/story/picture. Have a great/blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 3/21/2023 7:19:00 AM
Nice universe you've built here Las. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 3/21/2023 7:00:00 AM
Space and the outer gauntlet are carved in the brain……. In cosmic flow of microcosm and macrocosm,….. Wonderful. Big Congrats to win .
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Date: 3/19/2023 12:14:00 PM
Mother Nature's life flows as sepia tones unfold, Her thread feeds all life, from elfin buds to hold… With the pulse of creation, I inhale an azure spring. Very nice, Lasaad!
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Date: 3/19/2023 5:57:00 AM
Wonderfully journeying through the cosmos ---a poem of exploration, my friend.
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Date: 3/18/2023 6:37:00 PM
Great imagery and feeling. Enjoyed reading my friend. Good luck in the contest.
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