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Machine Counts Huge Notes

thousands swaying leaves 
                                             hot summer's bright breezy day 
                                               machine counts huge notes

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Poet Destroyer A

July 6, 2013 at 11:24 PM

Bl, interesting.... Linda

Judy Konos

July 6, 2013 at 10:26 AM

Ahhhhhhhh BANK NOTES! Thanks

Bl Devnath

July 6, 2013 at 8:42 PM

Smile, thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

June 28, 2013 at 8:53 PM

I miss reading and stopping by your poems... love the flying notes swinging through the breeze... xox~ Linda

Bl Devnath

June 29, 2013 at 9:23 AM

Many thanks for stopping by on my write. Loved always, bl

Donna Jones

June 28, 2013 at 7:04 PM

What a lovely write...

Bl Devnath

June 29, 2013 at 9:22 AM

Many thanks for your comment, my friend. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

June 28, 2013 at 7:03 PM

What is the machine, BL? Anyway, I love the imagery of the first two lines!!

Bl Devnath

June 29, 2013 at 9:21 AM

Thanks my friend for your comment. My friend, I have seen a tree the small (not very small) leaves of which were swinging continuously for a few seconds and stopped thereafter and again where I felt the same as notes are counted in bank by machine and I captured in this write. Again thanks, loved always, bl