Macabre Gaiety

Take my senses away
Make me crazy,
Stir some memories
Make a story;

Oh, Love me to death,
Give me a life then kill me.

Show me the way
Then lead me astray,
Enrich me with love
Then waylay me;

Be my friend, betray me,
Be my God, bedevil me.

Let's congregate in a tavern
Worship in this safe haven,
Follow no faith
Pander to no priest;

Let's hobnob with the angels,
Befriend the demons on the sly.

Drag my soul through the desert
Then carouse there in an oasis,
Set me ablaze with your passion
Then douse it with your sweat;

Let's sleep on a bed of cactuses
And thumb our noses at the heavens.

Ha, let's grow up
And just kid around,
Lie down in a grave
And wake up in a cradle;

Let's usurp the world from Atlas
And rattle the hell out of its core!


~A Strand (1047) contest
~Sponsor: Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/9/2016 9:10:00 AM
Congrats on your win with your dark - light poem.
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Date: 7/8/2016 4:32:00 PM
Great emotive write, Abdul! Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 7/8/2016 4:24:00 AM
Congrats Abdul, for your placement with this well, thought piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/7/2016 10:13:00 PM
Its beautifully penned down, Congratulations
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Date: 7/7/2016 1:43:00 PM
Abdul, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "PAIN GETS IN THE WAY OF FORGIVENESS" if you'd like..... Love LINDA
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Date: 3/8/2015 12:44:00 PM
Abdul, Congratulations, on your fine win. <3 LINDA <3
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Date: 3/5/2015 10:20:00 PM
Abdul, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Beginnings Matter Win ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/4/2015 2:41:00 PM
how awesome to get a win on your first contest on soup - very powerful imagery - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/10/2013 5:20:00 PM
Abdul, love the double impact winning poem... xox~ Linda
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Date: 10/6/2013 1:52:00 AM
abdul, I love this passionate writing from you and the cool way you contrasted feelings . The title really says it all. congrats on the winners list.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/6/2013 1:01:00 PM
I am glad you like it. It speaks of the state of my mind!
Date: 10/5/2013 8:43:00 PM
nice win......... love ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/13/2012 3:17:00 PM
A real go-to-hell attitude, Abdul. Love, it. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 11/13/2012 3:08:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem Abdul.
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Date: 11/13/2012 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. I appreciated your effort, as demonstrated in this posting. Keep writing and we will keep reading.
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Date: 11/13/2012 10:06:00 AM
For my soul will reach the sky...when my eyes have touched the ground...i walk on...kissing the air...singing threw my ears...and rattle the hell out if it's core...for I live 4ever more.... I don't know...but... read your write and felt this...thanks much..nice poem!
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Date: 11/13/2012 4:49:00 AM
...nice one!
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Date: 10/23/2012 5:16:00 PM
Congrats on your amazing win..Sara
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Date: 10/20/2012 12:04:00 PM
Great win...great write Abdul...congrats! Joy Wells
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Date: 10/19/2012 9:21:00 PM
Abdul, congratulations with your awesome win in the "Drunken Pen Round 2 " contest.....love the way you hold your pen. good night :-) xox PD
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Date: 10/19/2012 9:54:00 AM
congrats Abdul, this is a wonderful poem, i am honoured to share first place in the contest with you......
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/19/2012 7:30:00 PM
Thanks. I read your poem too, and, liked it.
Date: 10/19/2012 4:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Drunken Pen" contest Abdul. Love, Carol
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/19/2012 5:54:00 PM
Thanks a bunch!
Date: 10/19/2012 3:36:00 AM
Congrats on your win! I enjoyed reading this.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/19/2012 7:31:00 PM
Glad you liked it. Thanks
Date: 10/19/2012 1:48:00 AM
congrats friend Abdul on your win :) cheers!!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/19/2012 7:37:00 PM
Thanks my friend!
Date: 10/18/2012 3:28:00 PM
You have set yourself a FINE task GO for IT! Congrad's Light & Love
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/19/2012 7:35:00 PM
You haven't seen nothing yet! LOL!! Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Date: 10/16/2012 1:21:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this afternoon Abdul. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/19/2012 7:34:00 PM
I greatly appreciate your warm welcome!! Thanks a lot.
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