Macabre Gaiety

Take my senses away
Make me crazy,
Stir some memories
Make a story;

Oh, Love me to death,
Give me a life then kill me.

Show me the way
Then lead me astray,
Enrich me with love
Then waylay me;

Be my friend, betray me,
Be my God, bedevil me.

Let's congregate in a tavern
Worship in this safe haven,
Follow no faith
Pander to no priest;

Let's hobnob with the angels,
Befriend the demons on the sly.

Drag my soul through the desert
Then carouse there in an oasis,
Set me ablaze with your passion
Then douse it with your sweat;

Let's sleep on a bed of cactuses
And thumb our noses at the heavens.

Ha, let's grow up
And just kid around,
Lie down in a grave
And wake up in a cradle;

Let's usurp the world from Atlas
And rattle the hell out of its core!


~A Strand (1047) contest
~Sponsor: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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De Burca Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 9:10 AM
Congrats on your win with your dark - light poem.
Merryman Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 4:32 PM
Great emotive write, Abdul! Congrats on your placement!
Kimathi Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 4:24 AM
Congrats Abdul, for your placement with this well, thought piece!! ;-)
Zubair Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 10:13 PM
Its beautifully penned down, Congratulations
A   Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 1:43 PM
Abdul, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "PAIN GETS IN THE WAY OF FORGIVENESS" if you'd like..... Love LINDA
A   Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 12:44 PM
Abdul, Congratulations, on your fine win. <3 LINDA <3
A  Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 10:20 PM
Abdul, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Beginnings Matter Win ~SKAT~
Allison Avatar
March 4, 2015 at 2:41 PM
how awesome to get a win on your first contest on soup - very powerful imagery - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
A   Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 5:20 PM
Abdul, love the double impact winning poem... xox~ Linda
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 1:52 AM
abdul, I love this passionate writing from you and the cool way you contrasted feelings . The title really says it all. congrats on the winners list.
Mandani Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 1:01 PM
I am glad you like it. It speaks of the state of my mind!
A  Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 8:43 PM
nice win......... love ~SKAT~
Austin Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 3:17 PM
A real go-to-hell attitude, Abdul. Love, it. Congrats on the selection. daver
Gildersleeve Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 3:08 PM
Congrats on your featured poem Abdul.
Amadore Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 11:36 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. I appreciated your effort, as demonstrated in this posting. Keep writing and we will keep reading.
Ventura Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 10:06 AM
For my soul will reach the sky...when my eyes have touched the ground...i walk on...kissing the air...singing threw my ears...and rattle the hell out if it's core...for I live 4ever more.... I don't know...but... read your write and felt this...thanks much..nice poem!
Igwe Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 4:49 AM
...nice one!
Kendrick Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 5:16 PM
Congrats on your amazing win..Sara
Wellington Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 12:04 PM
Great win...great write Abdul...congrats! Joy Wells
A   Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 9:21 PM
Abdul, congratulations with your awesome win in the "Drunken Pen Round 2 " contest.....love the way you hold your pen. good night :-) xox PD
Horsman Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 9:54 AM
congrats Abdul, this is a wonderful poem, i am honoured to share first place in the contest with you......
Mandani Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 7:30 PM
Thanks. I read your poem too, and, liked it.
Brown Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 4:42 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Drunken Pen" contest Abdul. Love, Carol
Mandani Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 5:54 PM
Thanks a bunch!
Sefunmi Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 3:36 AM
Congrats on your win! I enjoyed reading this.
Mandani Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 7:31 PM
Glad you liked it. Thanks
Liwayway Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 1:48 AM
congrats friend Abdul on your win :) cheers!!
Mandani Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 7:37 PM
Thanks my friend!
Guzzi Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 3:28 PM
You have set yourself a FINE task GO for IT! Congrad's Light & Love
Mandani Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 7:35 PM
You haven't seen nothing yet! LOL!! Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Brown Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 1:21 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this afternoon Abdul. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
Mandani Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 7:34 PM
I greatly appreciate your warm welcome!! Thanks a lot.
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