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Mac In Hell, Age 19

Amidst the sea of confusion with the constant battering waves of of remorse Compass and ship swirling freely Renderling it pathetic and and weak All faith and hope lost in the tide Survival, bleak But then a light it pierced the sky Giving strength and security upon a mountain high guide me to your fortress release me from this tide of blue give me your hand to grab onto Lead me home to you..

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Christopher Higgins

Date: 12/12/2008 5:23:00 AM

Love the language of this piece. The poem flows well and the message is powerful. I hope they get led home.

Janetta Harrington

Date: 11/4/2008 10:52:00 PM

very stirring. like how did this happen. the energy to waste on a hard and dull life when it could be destined for any thing in this whole wide world. it takes effort to throw potential away and it is painful to be a parent that sees exactly what is going on....."release me from this tide of blue and give me your hand... lead me home to you. love sometimes cripples those we love the most.

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/30/2008 7:32:00 PM

Kimmy - wonderful poem - god bless