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Mac and Mac

To the diner Mac went for a meal Where he ordered two helpings of veal. All he had was one dime Could not pay! What a crime! Washing-up was the fairest MacDeal. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Limerick Contest Sponsor: Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer Placed 4th © 2nd June 2017

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/18/2017 5:16:00 PM

Lol! A fun and lighthearted limerick Paul. I enjoyed your word play and dish washing seems like a fair MacDeal indeed! Belated congrats on your fine placement. Warmest wishes my friend ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 12/19/2017 12:30:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed this change of mood, Susan:) Had I been Mac I would not have minded this deal...strange as it might seem, I like dish-washing!! ~ Warm regards // paul

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/23/2017 6:49:00 PM

Thank you for the laugh Paul. So deserving of a high placement on any winner's list. Congratulations:)

Paul Callus
Date: 8/25/2017 2:09:00 PM

So pleased it elicited a smile, Lynn:) Thank you! Wishing you a lovely weekend. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2017 7:54:00 PM

This one was one of my very favorites of them, Paul. Congrats on the winners' list.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/12/2017 4:25:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Enjoyed your winning entry, too:) Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/6/2017 6:11:00 PM

Hello Paul your limerick is cute it brought a smile to my face.I felt sad that the guy could not pay for his meal.Paul I .have a question I would like to ask you. I hope you can tell me my answer.Can eight verses be submitted all at once at the same time when submitting a poem? Thank you for answering.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/12/2017 8:08:00 PM

I did Paul my poem is titled A Life's Journey. Once I began to write this poem, my pen continued to write until I got a long poem written out. Regards. Thank you.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/7/2017 8:13:00 AM

Thank you Paul. Reguards

Paul Callus
Date: 6/7/2017 2:46:00 AM

I am pleased this brought a smile to your face, Darlene:) Thank you. ~ Of course you can submit 8 verses at one go; there should not be any problem. Regards // paul

Maria Williams

Date: 6/6/2017 8:43:00 AM

All the best for the Contest Paul - You deserve to win - very funny - Though I don't think Mac would have thought the washing up funny ... Maria

Paul Callus
Date: 6/7/2017 5:09:00 PM

Thank you for the faith you show in this Limerick, Maria...and for the pleasant visit:) Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2017 6:28:00 PM

this is AWESOME. I don't know how she will choose from all the clever entries! And thanks for seeing both poems on the cold hearted one! I think only one or two people preferred it as free verse.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/6/2017 5:40:00 PM

I'm elated by your feedback, Andrea! Thank you! ~ I think that any poem is usually at its best at the first attempt. Small changes can be made to better it (it often happens to me), but writing it all over seems to detract from its originality (my opinion, of course!) Regards // paul

John Michaels

Date: 6/4/2017 12:26:00 PM

Great limerick, Paul. Good luck with the contest. Regards, John.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/4/2017 2:53:00 PM

Thank you, John. Best regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/4/2017 7:06:00 AM

- This was good, Paul :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 6/4/2017 2:52:00 PM

Thank you for reading and liking, Anne-Lise:) Hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/4/2017 3:16:00 AM

A fun Limerick Paul! I can remember being in this spot once when I forgot my wallet, but thank goodness they trusted me to go get it and come back to pay. Good luck in the contest! : )

Paul Callus
Date: 6/4/2017 2:52:00 PM

Thank you, Connie. Forgetting or mislaying a wallet is one thing, but there are some who do it intentionally. Not long ago I saw a waiter running after two young tourists...they split up, went opposite ways and disappeared! Regards // paul

Vladislav Raven

Date: 6/3/2017 11:54:00 AM

Hi Paul, had to drop in on the Limerick. I now have my full laughter quota for this afternoon. A great Limerick my friend. I do like reading this form and you have done this write so well. This is one i can't do. This form has beaten me but at least i get to read the Limericks of others. Well written my friend. Your friend always....Mike. This one goes into my faves.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/4/2017 2:21:00 PM

So pleased to see you around again, Mike! Thank you for the your generosity, my friend. Wishing you all the very best...paul