Ma Nature Cleans House

ma nature cleans house....
under a carpet of snow
piles of unswept leaves
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A   Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 7:38 PM
Reason :) Congratulations on your fine win in Nancy's contest.. take care *LINDA
Morgan Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 9:03 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
Hendricks Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 3:15 PM
Sounds like my kind of housekeeping. Congratulations on your super win, Reason. Licia ;-)
Adams Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 8:25 AM
nice haiku....congrats on your win :)
Hamilton Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 7:48 AM
lovely haiku Reason much enjoyed reading congrats on place Shadow x smile
Gorelick Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 6:46 AM
wonderful...congrats. BG
Dietrich Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 10:29 PM
I had seen this one before and i LOVED it before. Simplicity at its best. Congrats.
Jones Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 10:05 PM
OMG! I've been there more than once. Very nice job. Just so you know, I judged this more on what made me laugh than what strict form was. A couple made me laugh really hard, but weren't really poems, they were simply jokes. Anyway, enjoyed this one muchly, thanks for supporting my contest. Namaste ~ N
Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 10:58 PM
I LOVE this. Just leave those leaves to ma nature!!!
Guzzi Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 1:58 PM
very creative view! light & Love
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