M I R R O R S Mimic-A Pantoum

We mirrors mimic emotions,
we know when you are sad,
your emotions are vast oceans,
for your pain we feel bad.

We know when you are sad,
we sigh for your invisible sigh,
for your pain we feel bad,
we are truthful, we never lie.

We sigh for your invisible sigh,
your anger, realms of regrets,
we are truthful, we never lie,
so throw regrets, mind's threats.

Your anger, realms of regrets,
your emotions are vast oceans,
so throw regrets, mind's threats
We mirrors mimic emotions.



April 1, 2016.
A Pantoum A Poet's Choice - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Eve Roper
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Raven Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 3:35 PM
Hi Meenakshi, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Ane emotional Pantoum....Mike.
A. Sharma Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 2:13 AM
Congrats on a worthy win with this superb poem Meenakshi..
Roper Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 6:36 PM
Meenaskshi, congratulations on your win! The reason for the HM is because the last stanza is to read as 7. 3. 8. 1. Your emotions are vast oceans 3. Hugs Eve
Roper Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 8:27 PM
You did a great job !
Raina Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 8:22 PM
Thanks Eve for letting me know....it was my first poem in Pantoum...and I will make the correction.
Allison Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 5:15 PM
many congrats on your HM win Meenaskshi:-) hugs Jan xx
Raina Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 8:22 PM
Thank you...
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