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Lyrical Bliss

Come hold me close let your hands start to play stroking and teasing my worries away i'll show you my chords and i'll teach you to strum my heart beating fast like the sound of a drum your fingers explore and i'm starting to shake my pitch starts to climb as i writhe like a snake higher and higher till it's almost a scream my head in the clouds like its all but a dream our bodies entwined like no other exists as we lie together in post lyrical bliss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/12/2015 2:36:00 PM
Thanks for everyones kind words,feeling very proud to have my poem featured :)
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Date: 5/10/2015 10:56:00 AM
Debbie :) Congratulations on having your poem featured this Mothers Day. SKAT love
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Date: 5/9/2015 6:59:00 AM
Thankyou very much for all the lovely messages and warm welcome to the group, I look forward to reading lots of everyones work and sharing more of mine with you all.much love :) x
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Date: 5/8/2015 2:03:00 PM
Welcome to Soup, Debbie! Your introductory poem is charming, passionate and impressive; both rhyme and rhythm work pleasantly. A high rating to you. // paul
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Date: 5/8/2015 1:58:00 PM
Debbie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/8/2015 12:19:00 PM
Debbie, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/8/2015 12:04:00 PM
aw thankyou very much :) xx
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Date: 5/8/2015 11:09:00 AM
great passionate write love the imagery you have used - great pulse and musical beat:-) Hugs Jan xx
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