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Lying With You

I lay there with you, my arm around In this moment I hear no sound I move so slowly as if to hide The simple worries I have inside You make small moves that I could see I felt as if this was coming closer to be Feeling your hand move along mine All worries of skill had gone behind There was not a thought of what actions came through Your smile reassured as I come closer to you With Our lips right away I suddenly find I am jolted with sound and hear so fine Realizing your lips are nowhere near I go back to the state where I cannot hear Only just now am I to see That I am merely lying with thee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/26/2016 12:53:00 AM
awesome to read this one again, Austin. LINDA
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Date: 8/8/2015 1:00:00 AM
:) SKAT
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Date: 11/20/2013 3:17:00 PM
Austin, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/20/2013 3:29:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Austin ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/20/2013 2:34:00 AM
Austin, deep, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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