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lying on the beach

eating an ice cream 
telling oneself life is sweet 
lying on the beach 

looking at the yachts 
believing they are in reach 
lying on the beach 

watching the seagulls 
having little accidents
lying on the beach 

see the stranded whales 
assuming they missed the tide 
lying on the beach 

getting a suntan 
thinking it comes at no cost 
lying on the beach 

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David Kavanagh

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Sally Eslinger Date: 8/17/2024 9:15:00 AM David, a visually, sensual imagist serenyu treat for me,profoundly meaningful with the double meaning of “lying,” which word in all very, very well.Your works inspiring my weekend! Thank you for writing and sharing! Hugs, sally Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 8/17/2024 10:23:00 AM Thanks again Sally, indeed a double meaning in each Senryu, with one common denominator (lying on the beach) was a fun one to ponder myself whilst writing, I’m delighted in some way my work inspired your weekend, cheers David

Tom Cunningham Date: 7/22/2024 3:56:00 PM Lifes a beach they say lol, I thought at first you're away somewhere. Hope you're keeping well David. Tom Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 7/22/2024 4:12:00 PM No not til September Tom, had a few trips in Ireland though, not to the beach lol! trying to find my way back into the soup, so bear with me, I’ve a fair bit of catching up to do, cheers David

I Am Anaya Date: 7/22/2024 2:57:00 PM Senryus get a point across in a simple brief way, l'll start there. One & five state we lie to ourselves. Two has imagery & perspective. Three carefully put! (bird poop or shit:)lol. Four I think of plastic sea trash inside whales. Cheers to deep thoughts & class act senryu's Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 7/22/2024 3:19:00 PM Excellent observations Anaya, I think I put a little lie into all of them, but not all readily apparent to everyone at the same time, our perspectives change as we go through life, mine certainly did anyway, thanks so much, cheers David

Lin Lane Date: 7/22/2024 2:51:00 PM High tide would prevent so much lying on the beach. Let’s blame it on the moon. No more stranded Whales… problem solved. Very nice setup, David. Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 7/22/2024 4:14:00 PM It’s a done deal how sweet! Lol Lin Lane Date: 7/22/2024 3:29:00 PM Lol David. I think it’s the perfect place to end up. Let’s get that ice cream. I’m paying! David Kavanagh Date: 7/22/2024 3:26:00 PM Yay let’s all have that ice cream and stop lying to ourselves, life’s all about moments after all, I’d no idea where this one would lead, certainly not back to the ice cream :) Lin Lane Date: 7/22/2024 3:11:00 PM Dilly and I did a bit of chatting earlier today and we are on the same page regarding many issues. With a higher tide seagulls will drop their loads in the sea. That solves problem #2. A yacht is not a necessity and life is not always sweet. No amount of lying on the beach will alter that. Suntans are overrated. Let’s enjoy what is sweet and have another ice cream. David Kavanagh Date: 7/22/2024 3:03:00 PM True Lin, high tide might prevent one type of lying on the beach, the other more dubious type, is a little bit more difficult to eradicate, Dilly below is sending out good vibes to the whales as we speak lol! Cheers David

Tom Woody Date: 7/22/2024 12:58:00 PM I like how each of your senryus carry a lesson, or at least a commentary. I suppose that's what good senryus are meant to accomplish, right? Meantime, I recommend no less than SPF 50 Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 7/22/2024 1:06:00 PM It’s probably best to buy a bottle of fake tan, I agree factor 50 sounds about right, thanks for the visit, cheers David