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Lust and Lovers

In the black of night in the foggy car thunder roaring lightning flashing torrential rain raging crashing on the metal roof explosions deafening. Excited souls moving madly kissing deeply scorching tongues hot with desire sultry emotions brief instances of brilliant light informing on their passion their fierce desire. Thunder and lightning exploding igniting entangled groping for a deeper meaning maddening roar of the raucous rain lust and lovers. And the brief beach by the tiny lake was indifferent silent witness to the din but through the deluge through the lightning only they the rain and the thunder knew. (click on the pic to preview my poetry book!)

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Date: 1/8/2021 10:14:00 PM
"Only they, the rain and the thunder knew" Oh my !! Exciting and inviting moments indeed. This is filled with those teasing, yet pleasing sensations. I am smiling and blushing, all at the same time. I love everything about the rain. :) Brandy
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 1/9/2021 8:18:00 AM
I cannot describe the volume of the thunder lightning and rain that occured on that night. It was deafening and the moments within the storm electric.

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