Lust

Tiny beads with musk trickle in the crush of my bust.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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James Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 12:41 AM
Quite the picture...:) loved it!
Murray Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 1:42 AM
And I love that you love it James.
Gupta Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 8:54 AM
Formidable ! ...
Murray Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 11:30 AM
"Tending to inspire awe or wonder :  impressive a formidable accomplishment". I like to think so Probir.....
Warrior Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 7:19 AM
Lusty haiku Jean...best of luck my friend...^WW^
Murray Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 7:48 AM
Thank you WW.
Muideen Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 5:08 PM
what a beautiful gem. thanks for sharing.
Murray Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 7:31 PM
So nice of you to say Afolabi.
Flats Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 5:05 PM
Singed my eyelashes reading this 'un!
Flats Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 8:42 PM
Now I'm bust'n!!!
Murray Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 7:30 PM
Someone call the fire brigade!
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 3:31 PM
Oooh great assonance in this one. GREAT job.
Murray Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 3:57 PM
Lovely to see you. Thank you.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 1:49 PM
Saucy! :)
Murray Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 7:50 AM
Hi Maureen. Thanks for stopping by.
Wigley Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 10:10 AM
In my case, 'streams of sweat and Hai Karate head off for a man boob party". Not quite as lustful as your winning work, Jean. Viv x
Murray Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 7:48 AM
"A man boob party?" I think I'll pass...
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 9:09 PM
Awesome image , Jean :)
Murray Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 3:36 AM
Thank you Eve.
Turner Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 2:36 PM
I think that's called something else, Jean:) good luck!
Murray Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 2:43 PM
What pray tell?
Andresen Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 1:39 PM
- Lovely done, Jean - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 2:10 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
Smith Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 12:58 PM
The twins may need a new roof...
Murray Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 1:06 PM
Somehow this makes sense Charlie.
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 11:19 AM
ooh err Jean:-) hugs jan xx
Murray Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 1:03 PM
Jan, I knew I was going to have fun with this one.
Smith Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 10:58 AM
Oh my ...
Murray Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 6:35 PM
That's no fun.
Smith Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 1:16 PM
I had to censor myself...lol
Murray Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 1:02 PM
Suddenly stuck for words are we? Not even a tiny tease Tim?
Michael Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 10:55 AM
Very good... It made me smile...Thanks for sharing...Have a nice day
Murray Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 1:01 PM
It made me LOL Arturo.
Petersen Potter Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 9:52 AM
Beautiful love Monoku Jean!:) Be blessed!:) D.
Murray Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 9:59 AM
Thank you Dorian.
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