Lust

Tiny beads with musk trickle in the crush of my bust.

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Just James

Date: 9/8/2017 12:41:00 AM

Quite the picture...:) loved it!

Jean Murray
Date: 9/8/2017 1:42:00 AM

And I love that you love it James.

Probir Gupta

Date: 7/28/2017 8:54:00 AM

Formidable ! ...

Jean Murray
Date: 7/28/2017 11:30:00 AM

"Tending to inspire awe or wonder : impressive a formidable accomplishment". I like to think so Probir.....

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/27/2017 7:19:00 AM

Lusty haiku Jean...best of luck my friend...^WW^

Jean Murray
Date: 7/27/2017 7:48:00 AM

Thank you WW.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/26/2017 5:08:00 PM

what a beautiful gem. thanks for sharing.

Jean Murray
Date: 7/26/2017 7:31:00 PM

So nice of you to say Afolabi.

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 7/26/2017 5:05:00 PM

Singed my eyelashes reading this 'un!

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 7/26/2017 8:42:00 PM

Now I'm bust'n!!!

Jean Murray
Date: 7/26/2017 7:30:00 PM

Someone call the fire brigade!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2017 3:31:00 PM

Oooh great assonance in this one. GREAT job.

Jean Murray
Date: 7/26/2017 3:57:00 PM

Lovely to see you. Thank you.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/25/2017 1:49:00 PM

Saucy! :)

Jean Murray
Date: 7/26/2017 7:50:00 AM

Hi Maureen. Thanks for stopping by.

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/25/2017 10:10:00 AM

In my case, 'streams of sweat and Hai Karate head off for a man boob party". Not quite as lustful as your winning work, Jean. Viv x

Jean Murray
Date: 7/26/2017 7:48:00 AM

"A man boob party?" I think I'll pass...

Eve Roper

Date: 7/24/2017 9:09:00 PM

Awesome image , Jean :)

Jean Murray
Date: 7/25/2017 3:36:00 AM

Thank you Eve.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/24/2017 2:36:00 PM

I think that's called something else, Jean:) good luck!

Jean Murray
Date: 7/24/2017 2:43:00 PM

What pray tell?

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/24/2017 1:39:00 PM

- Lovely done, Jean - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 7/24/2017 2:10:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise.

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/24/2017 12:58:00 PM

The twins may need a new roof...

Jean Murray
Date: 7/24/2017 1:06:00 PM

Somehow this makes sense Charlie.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/24/2017 11:19:00 AM

ooh err Jean:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 7/24/2017 1:03:00 PM

Jan, I knew I was going to have fun with this one.

Tim Smith

Date: 7/24/2017 10:58:00 AM

Oh my ...

Jean Murray
Date: 7/24/2017 6:35:00 PM

That's no fun.

Tim Smith
Date: 7/24/2017 1:16:00 PM

I had to censor myself...lol

Jean Murray
Date: 7/24/2017 1:02:00 PM

Suddenly stuck for words are we? Not even a tiny tease Tim?

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/24/2017 10:55:00 AM

Very good... It made me smile...Thanks for sharing...Have a nice day

Jean Murray
Date: 7/24/2017 1:01:00 PM

It made me LOL Arturo.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 7/24/2017 9:52:00 AM

Beautiful love Monoku Jean!:) Be blessed!:) D.

Jean Murray
Date: 7/24/2017 9:59:00 AM

Thank you Dorian.