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LUST behold ten fingers that touch and reach out for more exquisitely so you licked up the crumbs when you toppled the whole jar after your first bite your tongue searched for more in serpentine style of hiss then laid eyes on her your first desired wench you held on with pitbull clench you could have killed her a harem’s your due and a hefty sum of gold as you pick your teeth you’re delighted to ignore the seventh command — now want wives of friends climb upon backsides of your working buds - see not their humanity your milky way face longs to lick the universe and gobble it up pursued in the end by wrinkles of mouth and lips tightening their grip 10/22/2018 Seven Deadly Sins Poetry Contest Sponsor - Edward Ibeh

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Date: 11/21/2018 12:18:00 AM
This is too good to be true. I love all the lines.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/21/2018 7:02:00 AM
Thank you, Ibohal!
Date: 11/11/2018 1:47:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Kim. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2018 1:47:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 11/7/2018 12:32:00 PM
Can picture it all! Excellent and congrats, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2018 3:58:00 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 11/6/2018 9:29:00 PM
What a stunningly creative poem on lust, Kim! Exquisite in every way..I am in awe! Congrats on your well deserved win! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2018 5:36:00 AM
Thank you, Laura!
Date: 11/6/2018 8:23:00 PM
This is really an incredible poem and I've appreciate it more each time I've read it. Congratulations of your winning placement. Very well-deserved. My best. Deb
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2018 8:39:00 PM
Thanks so much, Deb!
Date: 11/6/2018 3:57:00 PM
Thanks for participating in my contest, Kim!:-) Absolutely awesome! One of my favorites in the contest! Congratulations on your top win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/6/2018 4:32:00 PM
Thanks so much, Edward!
Date: 10/25/2018 3:21:00 PM
Very 'snakey,' --- I mean sneaky! Great entry for the contest! ~ gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2018 8:51:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 10/24/2018 7:00:00 PM
I love this, especially the 5th stanza; that classic scene of a lord with his harem and gold is reminiscent of decadent ancient royalty and empires, a perfect connection to the Biblical inspiration for the poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2018 7:49:00 PM
Thank you, Nemo!
Date: 10/23/2018 4:26:00 PM
Chillingly lustful...good luck in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2018 4:27:00 PM
Thank you, M.L.!
Date: 10/23/2018 1:51:00 PM
Thais was amazing Kim. I just loved it. Best of luck in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2018 3:08:00 PM
Thank you, Chris! <3 Kim
Date: 10/23/2018 7:55:00 AM
OMG! Great take on the contest!!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2018 3:07:00 PM
Thanks so much, Silent! <3 Kim
Date: 10/22/2018 7:10:00 PM
wow, SO good, Kim. I just love the imagery in this set.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/22/2018 7:38:00 PM
Thanks so much! Your commentary means a lot to me! <3 Kim

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