Luscious Strawberries My Tongue Can Wrap Around

Sister,
Hurry. Hurry.
Stop dilly-dallying,
The ice-cream truck is coming round.
If we don't hurry up it'll have a crowd.
Another scorching humid summer day.
How I'd fancy this afternoon
A dish of ice-cream topped
With strawberries,
Sister

 

7/12/2022

A rictameter is a nine line poetry form with a 2 4 6 8 10 8 6 4 2 syllable count and where the first and the last lines keep repeating,
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Baker Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 3:52 PM
Now I want some ice cream, especially if I can have strawberries on top. :-) Bill
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July 12, 2022 at 1:12 AM
Wonderful lively poem, Eve. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Hugs.
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