Luscious Love Lingers--Linda-Marie

Peaches plumb perfection
Put peeled pickled and pleasing
Fruit fresh for freezing
Icecream in innocent
Hands has hundreds of hugs
Peaches perfection
Love light and lasting
Eternal ecstasy everlasting
Taste tongue to tummy totally tantalizing!
Smell the scent, senses soaring
Fragrantly frolicking face to face
Final fun frozen forever
Luscious love lingers!


**For Linda-Marie's contest note * tough subject for me Peaches are my favorite fruit 
and I just did the best I could with it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 1:45 PM
Such lovely words for a very sweet lady,Thanks Doris.Teresa
Brown Avatar
September 9, 2010 at 11:09 AM
Congratulations Doris on your win in Linda Marie's contest "Luscious Love Lingers"Alliteration. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2010 at 8:01 PM
Doris, a nice win in the contest. that first line sure showed your love of peaches, Doris! Luv, Andrea
La France Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 9:45 PM
Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest with this beautiful poem.. Constance
Sweetheart Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 7:42 AM
Congrats Doris on your win in my LLL Alliteration contest... a wonderful write and effort ..appreciate your support ... enjoy your win this holiday with luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
August 27, 2010 at 7:43 PM
thankxxx for supporting my contest Doris.. good luck..with luv..
Mannan Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 10:45 PM
A lovely alliteration dear doris. All the best for the contest. Thanks for your kind comments.
Neels Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 8:46 PM
Doris you did great with this.. All the best for Linda's contest.. Love Wilma
Taylor Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 8:08 PM
Excellent entry, Doris. Outstanding write. Good luck. Thanks for your kind words. xxxRalph
Bracken Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 7:58 PM
This is a very nice poem. Great job. Good luck in this very hard contest, Shirley
Devonshire Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 7:38 PM
Doris, I go to the doctor tomorrow at 1:30. Wish me luck! Thanks for asking. Love, Carolyn
Devonshire Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 7:27 PM
You made good use of the alliteration, Doris. It was a tough theme. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 6:28 PM
A nice poem with alliteration with peaches as a theme, Doris
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