Gregory Richard Barden Poet Free verse

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Luscious

Sin

   Oh, my ...

      Desire, divine

         What I would give

            To nibble your saucy bits

               You are a wine-taster's banquet

                  Each exquisite inch of your integument

                     Hides a sweet savor all its very delectable own

                  Poured to pique the primal compulsions

               And treat the tongue, its tang

            What a journey it could be

         Inch-to-sublime-inch

      A fiery feast

   Of you ...

Skin.




* FIRST PLACE in the "Contest 425 Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Sponsor. *

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Line Gauthier April 20, 2018 at 5:25 PM Beautifully sensuous poem, Gregory. I love the form you created. Congrats on your most deserving gold medal. Gregory Richard Barden April 20, 2018 at 10:34 PM Many kind thanks to you, Line - I'm glad you liked it! Blessings, friend! :-) <3

Susan Gentry April 20, 2018 at 10:37 AM Oh my! Sigh... sensual highly provocative poem you have here... skin on skin... and the form... beautifully written. A fave. Gregory Richard Barden April 20, 2018 at 10:33 PM That's very kind of you, Susan - I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! A favorite genre/subject matter of mine. Blessings! :-) <3 Susan Gentry April 20, 2018 at 10:38 AM Oh! Congratulations on your #1 win ... totally slipped my mind lol

Tom Cunningham April 20, 2018 at 10:31 AM Well written verse Greg, congratulations. Tom. Gregory Richard Barden April 20, 2018 at 10:32 PM Thank you very much, Tom - blessings! :-)

Pailey Gordon April 20, 2018 at 10:07 AM Beautiful format Gregory! I enjoyed reading this! Thank you:) Gregory Richard Barden April 20, 2018 at 10:32 PM Thank you so much, Pailey - I'm glad you liked it! Blessings! :-) <3

Gershon Wolf April 12, 2018 at 4:37 PM The form you've employed to wrap this rapturous write should be classified, copyrighted, and canonized. Excellent! As always, gw :) Gregory Richard Barden April 12, 2018 at 8:38 PM That's a wonderful comment, Gershon, and I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. Blessings, Friend! :-)

Faraz Ajmal April 12, 2018 at 1:21 PM Oh it s a really beautiful write, really enjoyed reading this one, Gregory Richard Barden April 12, 2018 at 8:38 PM Very kind of you, Fraz - thank you so much! :-)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 11, 2018 at 9:13 AM Sizzlin sauciness x Gregory Richard Barden April 12, 2018 at 8:37 PM Thank you, Mo! <3

Becca Teagan April 8, 2018 at 8:33 AM Wow!! This is sizzling hot, mister, but so tastefully done. Beautiful word choices here. Gregory Richard Barden April 11, 2018 at 12:53 AM Very kind of you, Becca, thanks so much ... another one that's not getting comments. Maybe people have just stopped reading me, I don't know - this darkly-tinged sensual genre is a favorite of mine, and I usually get good response. Blessings for your appreciation, friend! <3