Lurid Resonance

One boom,
Excitement; what,
Distraction so quickly,
Anxious to a maximum thrust.
Astounded, wondering, if others heard.
Expressive quiet; following,
Lost, for just a minute,
Bewildered shake,
One boom,


written for
Sponsor nette onclaud 
Contest Name SOUND OF EMOTION
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 3:41 PM
Winner for sure...Good luck in the contest..Sara
Green Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 1:13 AM
Only ONE boom? C'mon- better have at least 3! Just kidding. Like this a lot! GL in the contest !
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