Lung Killer

Even though she needs
to feel it between
her lips she won't
smoke those cancer
sticks because then 
he'd be in her lungs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 25, 2015 at 1:48 AM
Only I get this right now -sleepless
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 8:16 AM
Excellent pen Ana! Enjoyed your piece yes, cigarettes are silent killers. Glad she doesn't. A 7 from me!Have a good day! :) Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^""
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January 19, 2015 at 8:46 AM
Thank you!
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