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- Lune Haiku X 1 - Politics Inhuman -

Border politics
                                      Donald Duck
                                Child without parents















19.06.2018
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The lune is also known as the American Haiku 5-3-5 Syllables
Any topic, meter, rhyme, metaphor allowed

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Panagiota Romios

April 7, 2023 at 8:32 AM

It’s 2023 now, we have millions of illegals Crime rampant. Border children, are lost so the Mexican Cartels have killed many. China and also Mexico are making millions shipping Fentanyl here. We are losing over 100,000 Americans a year. Including children. It looks like. colored candy, A country with no borders is not a country.plus Chinese coming via Canada. We won’t survive longer. Plus countries are sending criminals not families. We never had barbed wire here. Europe will cheer as we go down in flames.Pangie

Besma Riabi Dziri

July 4, 2018 at 5:09 PM

A great Haiku that touches humanity! A brilliant write dear Anne-Lise! Good to know about the American Haiku.. thank you for sharing.. Stay safe and blessed.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 5, 2018 at 1:38 PM

- Besma, thank you so much for your very kind comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 30, 2018 at 9:50 AM

Been missing you Anne-Lise...

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 2, 2018 at 1:59 PM

- Thank you, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 26, 2018 at 7:37 AM

Thankfully he changed the policy.. Hope you are well Anne-Lise..

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 2, 2018 at 1:58 PM

- Thank you S.O., for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

June 25, 2018 at 2:33 AM

Excellent. Very touching lines. Sad too. Thanks for sharing it.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 2, 2018 at 1:58 PM

- Thank you Ravi, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 22, 2018 at 7:27 PM

It is worse now his planning on building refugee camps to house over 100,000 , 200,000 people,,, He has no intention to let them go back , but lock them up :(

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 2, 2018 at 1:57 PM

- Thank you Eve, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

June 21, 2018 at 7:50 PM

An interesting one. Thanks for explaining the form, Ann Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 2, 2018 at 1:57 PM

- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 21, 2018 at 7:02 PM

sad :(

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 2, 2018 at 1:56 PM

- Thank you Casarah, for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose

June 21, 2018 at 5:45 PM

this says so much, I don't think he understands about unity. Well done poetess,

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 2, 2018 at 1:56 PM

- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Pixie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 20, 2018 at 11:54 PM

Meaningfully beautiful, Sunshine ... The harsh reality so poetically expressed in just thirteen syllables ... Best wishes for the contest ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 21, 2018 at 4:07 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 20, 2018 at 11:18 PM

The four Presidents before Trump all did the same thing, Bush even made it law you had to separate families. They ALL were wrong. Children are not pawns. You hurt a child you will answer to God!

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 21, 2018 at 3:54 AM

The invasion of Norway in April 9, 1940 occupied Germany, Denmark and Norway ... they did the same - Separated children and parents .... was it right? ... No, as you say everyone was wrong - I thought we had learned ... we live in 2018 - Everyone is allowed to have their own opinion ... but I think it's madness ! - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 20, 2018 at 8:01 PM

I agree with some of Trump's policies but not this one~just downright cruel for the children to be split up from their parents! A well written heartfelt write Anne-Lise; Good luck in the contest!~Che :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 21, 2018 at 4:06 AM

- Mr. Duck is not God ... - God bless America and the rest of the world - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Cheryl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

June 20, 2018 at 12:57 PM

So tragic and so inhumane but so true. Heartbreaking for sure. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 20, 2018 at 3:01 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 20, 2018 at 9:21 AM

Well written and brutally true, Anne-Lise. If children are being put into "detention camps", makes you wonder who will be next.//Warren :(

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 20, 2018 at 3:01 PM

- Nothing surprises anymore when it comes from Mr. Duck, Warren - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 20, 2018 at 8:23 AM

WOW, have you nailed that Anne-Lise, excellent xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 20, 2018 at 2:58 PM

- Many thanks Mike, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

June 20, 2018 at 5:44 AM

Pertinent witty writing od a tragic truth! Superb my friend, Anne-Lise. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 20, 2018 at 2:58 PM

- Many thanks Demetrios, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 19, 2018 at 9:43 PM

It's terrible what they are doing to these kids, and congress is silent...

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 20, 2018 at 2:57 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 19, 2018 at 9:26 PM

Hello Dear Anne-Lise!! What timing with your poem here. How true your words are and more so!! You touched a nerve with this one. By the way, I just posted, in the wee-hours of the morning here in Germany a Political Verse poem called, "The Little Children are Crying." I write about this same mindless tragedy and use my "Pied Piper"name for (Trump), and "Mr. Magoo" for his dithering Attorney General, Jeff Sessions, the one who cited the biblical quote used to justify slavery. Superb!! Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 20, 2018 at 2:49 PM

- It is shocking to see that refugee children are divorced from their families and placed in detention camps in the United States, Gary - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 19, 2018 at 6:12 PM

A verse to be seen by all Anne-Lise...when will this all end?...love & light for the children...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 20, 2018 at 2:54 PM

- Man uses not mothers and children as pawns in a political game ... - Dot.. ! - Many thanks for your visit and comment, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 19, 2018 at 5:35 PM

Amen, Sunshine. Be assured that most of us across the Atlantic are enraged at this terrible situation.

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 20, 2018 at 2:51 PM

- Unworthy treatment of refugee children, Sunlite - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 19, 2018 at 4:07 PM

Yes..you are right Anne-Lise..we are in the midst of political games..playing with children's lives..very apt topic.

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 20, 2018 at 2:37 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 19, 2018 at 2:53 PM

Well said Sunshine, it is indeed a sad day for mankind. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 19, 2018 at 3:01 PM

- Tom, he takes the children to punish the parents ... what policy is that ? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 19, 2018 at 2:31 PM

Excellent topical poem. Very well done. Cheers

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 19, 2018 at 2:33 PM

- The Mexican people express a strong condemnation of this cruel and inhumane policy ... and I think the whole world agrees, John - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 19, 2018 at 2:31 PM

i heard the children crying on tv.. a dramatic, painful scene, anne... fine job!...happy huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 19, 2018 at 2:37 PM

- Trumps policy is inhuman, heartbreaking Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 19, 2018 at 2:22 PM

BRILLIANT and so topical Anne-lise - he sure needs to 'duck' from all the negative publicity, I hope Mo will love this:-) hugfs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 19, 2018 at 2:34 PM

- D. D. have to rethink the policy and prioritize the welfare and rights of these children, Jan - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

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