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Lune - Forsaken

old damaged piano once caressed by skilled fingers now silenced forever what masterly hands unlocked pure magical music via your ivory keys May 12, 2020 ~5th Place~ Contest: Flow With The Collum Lune - Visual 1 Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Judged: 05/13/2020
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Poteet Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 10:17 PM
some of them are out-of-tune but that adds to the nostalgia. Good one, Sandra, I enjoyed it, as a pianist.
Watt Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 1:48 PM
Sandra, there's just something so nostalgic and melancholy about an old piano. You captured this well, congrats on your win ~ John
Callus Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 1:04 PM
Congratulations on being included in Nette's final winners' list, Sandra...no mean feat! Your musing seems to want to bring memories back to life. ~ Regards // paul
Allison Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 7:48 AM
lovely interpretation of the image Sandra I too chose this picture. hope you and the family are all well during these trying times:-) hugs Jan xx
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May 12, 2020 at 7:46 AM
Love your interpretation of the picture Sandra, Good luck in the contest Tom
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