Lune - Music

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moved by music there's an up and down in every key... ...the puppeteer's ploy "I play a mean, Human." snickered the piano Lune Contest nette onclaud Visual 1 May 12th. 2020

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/14/2021 7:32:00 AM

Charming and clever, Timothy ~

Silent One

Date: 5/18/2020 4:53:00 PM

Very clever... You have a bright mind

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/16/2020 7:11:00 PM

An novel viewpoint and twist of words.Always a surprise in your poems. SuZ

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/16/2020 8:26:00 AM

This is better on giving it a second read. The human, “I want to be a real instrument!”

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/14/2020 2:18:00 AM

This is clever and cute Timothy. It brought a smile! Thank you. xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/13/2020 11:47:00 AM

Wow Timothy - 'snickered the piano' - a definite win,so imaginative! Blessings, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/12/2020 5:47:00 PM

verrrry interesting, Timothy. Does it have an extra underlying meaning?

Justin Bordner

Date: 5/12/2020 5:38:00 PM

Brilliant viewpoint Poet...how can One complain about being played so powerfully. Great choice with having the piano snicker, frickin awesome idea. A FAV! I thank you as well for your comments on my work, they are valuable to me...J.A.B.