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Lune - Music

moved by music
there's an up and down
in every key...

...the puppeteer's ploy
"I play a mean, Human."
snickered the piano



Lune Contest
nette onclaud
Visual 1
May 12th. 2020

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Line Gauthier Date: 4/14/2021 7:32:00 AM Charming and clever, Timothy ~ Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 5/18/2020 4:53:00 PM Very clever... You have a bright mind Login to Reply

Suzanne Delaney Date: 5/16/2020 7:11:00 PM An novel viewpoint and twist of words.Always a surprise in your poems. SuZ Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/16/2020 8:26:00 AM This is better on giving it a second read. The human, “I want to be a real instrument!” Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 5/14/2020 2:18:00 AM This is clever and cute Timothy. It brought a smile! Thank you. xxoo Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 5/13/2020 11:47:00 AM Wow Timothy - 'snickered the piano' - a definite win,so imaginative! Blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/12/2020 5:47:00 PM verrrry interesting, Timothy. Does it have an extra underlying meaning? Login to Reply

Justin Bordner Date: 5/12/2020 5:38:00 PM Brilliant viewpoint Poet...how can One complain about being played so powerfully. Great choice with having the piano snicker, frickin awesome idea. A FAV! I thank you as well for your comments on my work, they are valuable to me...J.A.B. Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 5/12/2020 1:41:00 PM Up down for sure in every key--your second stanza is awesome. All the best, Tim. Login to Reply

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/12/2020 1:26:00 PM I freakn' LOVE it! A fave all the way ~x Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/12/2020 12:50:00 PM Cute! Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 5/12/2020 12:31:00 PM Love your interpretation of the picture Timothy, Good luck in the contest. Tom Login to Reply