Lunch Box

LUNCH BOX

The sandwich was probably only two days old
School had let out for Christmas vacation on the 23rd
And now    on Christmas Eve    Sam had found it -        
     lunchbox and all -  in an alley behind Clarke’s Super
The kid had taken a couple of bites of the apple – now
     gone brown- but left the roast beef sandwich whole
“Too damn much mayo!” Sam frowned
“But boy am I hungry!”

Licorice    the cat – so named by the neighborhood kids –
     was hungry too    and let Sam know it with his most
     plaintiff cry
Sam was street-wise    an old cardboard box dweller who
     had tenanted many boxes   many alleys    in his time
Yet    this was no “Hello puss    whose puss are you?”
     animal summons for attention
The yowl had a bone-rattle desperation Sam hadn’t heard
     before

Licorice blended with the night
But stood out even against the gloom
She was pressed against an empty oil barrel    back arched
     on the tips of her paws    so almost skeletal
Sam couldn’t help but sigh
It was Christmas Eve    and despite the location – a forlorn
     back alley – a string of lights (from somewhere) were
     blinking
On
Off
On
Off
On
Off
On
The red-green-gold shown against Licorice’s satin fur
Charmed the (already charmed) night
Charmed Sam the Box Man
“Well I’ll be damned!” he gulped
Then threw half the sandwich to the starving kitty
“Merry Christmas old beggar.” Sam smiled

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/13/2010 12:21:00 AM
haha, cute one. Poor cat and poor old guy! This is a great Christmas slice of life on the streets with the homeless. As for the footles, you just need a good rhyming dictionary, but I have done maybe a third the dictionary and got close to 200 of them. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/11/2010 8:36:00 PM
Presentation is lively,Daver.Beautiful and touching thoughts bloomed with a lunch box
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Date: 12/11/2010 11:32:00 AM
Dave a delightful and heartwarming write.. Lovely message and so much enjoyed tonight.. Love Wilma
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Date: 12/10/2010 2:07:00 PM
In his desperate situation, the homeless had more care and compassion than many of wealthy means..I am glad that I came by here and I was glad that you dropped by my humble work, read, and commented..Since I have been having so much pain everyday task are very painful..Lunch was a feast for sure but wore me down..Country fried cubed steak with onion gravy, dried butterbeans, peas, rice, and homemade cornbread..Time consuming and hard work standing there to do all that..Sara
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Date: 12/10/2010 11:18:00 AM
You may not be an old beggar, but I'm seeing some of your soft heart for kitties in this poem, Daver. A precious write! A couple of my own cats had the same bone-chilling cry when they were hungry. But I don't think they would have eaten a leftover sandwich. Too finicky! If they didn't like what was offered, the yowling would continue until something more to their liking appeared in the bowl. This is one for my favorites, dear Daver. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/10/2010 11:09:00 AM
Hi Daver.This is a vey sweet poem with a Christmas message,but going that one step further including the animal kingdom.I can picture it,the down-and-out affected by the spirit of Christmas willing to share his meal,meagre as it was with another one of God's creatures.A lovely soft image showing all that is good in the human race.I love this and all the lovely thoughts it conjures up.Thank you.Love June.
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Date: 12/10/2010 8:55:00 AM
Sweetly touching write Dave.. sharing the sandwich is like sharing luv .. makes one feel all warm and fuzzy inside.. excellent piece my friend... luv the on and off of the blinking lights... great imagery ...happy weekend with luv..
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Date: 12/10/2010 8:42:00 AM
A 'deliteful' write Dave ! I was really into this write dear poet, it was visual and alluring...and I am so glad the cat got the feed ! *smiles* much love, james
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