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IN THIS POEM THE RAVEN REPRESENTS BOTH DEATH AND LIFE.

Lunar Eclipse

Raven Blue twilight,

Existence epitomized,

Formless shadows lurk.


8~June~2017

Copyright © White Wolf | Year Posted 2017

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June 12, 2017 at 2:32 PM

Hello White Wolf. This is impressive not only in theme but in the format tone and voice. Thank you for sharing your talent. Hope all is well.

June 12, 2017 at 2:37 PM

Thank you, Lisa! All is well with me this morning, enjoy your day /|\

Vladislav Raven

June 10, 2017 at 4:04 PM

Hi White Wolf, The raven always sings in my imagination. I have always loved the Haiku form, especially when it is well written. I knew i would be coming to a well written Haiku and i was not wrong. Excellent work my friend. Me being me, i am wondering what is lurking, this Haiku sets the imagination to turning my friend. An excellent write, well thought out. Has to be a fave and it would have received the highest rating. Your Friend always....Mike.

June 11, 2017 at 10:20 PM

Thank you for your lovely comment, Mike /|\

June 10, 2017 at 1:59 PM

beautiful in its mystical feel, WW... way out of this world.. huggs

June 11, 2017 at 10:17 PM

Thank you, Nette /|\

June 10, 2017 at 1:55 PM

very nicely done, WW, ~*

June 11, 2017 at 10:17 PM

Thank you, Eve /|\

June 9, 2017 at 6:48 PM

5-7-5; I get it now! Thanks again, and nice job. - Dean

June 10, 2017 at 12:57 AM

Thank you, Dean /|\

Richard Lamoureux

June 9, 2017 at 9:01 AM

I like the feel of this piece.

June 10, 2017 at 12:56 AM

Thank you, Richard /|\

June 9, 2017 at 2:51 AM

That painting is yours too, I recognize the style :) And I love it!

June 10, 2017 at 12:55 AM

Yes, it is! Thanks, Duir /|\

June 8, 2017 at 10:18 PM

Great Haiku, The Raven is also in chat!! hint hint! LOL

June 8, 2017 at 10:20 PM

Haha, coming now /|\

Connie Marcum Wong

June 8, 2017 at 4:17 PM

There has always been a mistique about the Raven for me. I enjoyed your haiku WW. : ) 7

June 8, 2017 at 6:17 PM

Yes, I agree with you! Thanks, Connie /|\

June 8, 2017 at 9:15 AM

Awesome Budgie

June 8, 2017 at 6:14 PM

Thanks, Tim /|\

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 8, 2017 at 8:21 AM

- Well done, W.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 8, 2017 at 6:13 PM

Thank you kindly /|\

Scott Thirtyseven

June 8, 2017 at 7:46 AM

Great images. Well penned

June 8, 2017 at 7:53 AM

Thank you, Scott /|\ Enjoy your night

June 8, 2017 at 6:37 AM

Really cool Rick. Mystical ink flows from your pen my friend.

June 8, 2017 at 6:40 AM

Thank you, Chris! I hope it's not too obscure /|\

June 7, 2017 at 11:50 PM

nicely penned tribute to the Genesis.... loved this one...

June 7, 2017 at 11:59 PM

Thank you my friend, enjoy your day/night /|\

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