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IN THIS POEM THE RAVEN REPRESENTS BOTH DEATH AND LIFE.

Raven Blue twilight, Existence epitomized, Formless shadows lurk.
8~June~2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/12/2017 2:32:00 PM
Hello White Wolf. This is impressive not only in theme but in the format tone and voice. Thank you for sharing your talent. Hope all is well.
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Date: 6/12/2017 2:37:00 PM
Thank you, Lisa! All is well with me this morning, enjoy your day /|\
Date: 6/10/2017 4:04:00 PM
Hi White Wolf, The raven always sings in my imagination. I have always loved the Haiku form, especially when it is well written. I knew i would be coming to a well written Haiku and i was not wrong. Excellent work my friend. Me being me, i am wondering what is lurking, this Haiku sets the imagination to turning my friend. An excellent write, well thought out. Has to be a fave and it would have received the highest rating. Your Friend always....Mike.
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Date: 6/11/2017 10:20:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment, Mike /|\
Date: 6/10/2017 1:59:00 PM
beautiful in its mystical feel, WW... way out of this world.. huggs
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Date: 6/11/2017 10:17:00 PM
Thank you, Nette /|\
Date: 6/10/2017 1:55:00 PM
very nicely done, WW, ~*
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Date: 6/11/2017 10:17:00 PM
Thank you, Eve /|\
Date: 6/9/2017 6:48:00 PM
5-7-5; I get it now! Thanks again, and nice job. - Dean
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Date: 6/10/2017 12:57:00 AM
Thank you, Dean /|\
Date: 6/9/2017 9:01:00 AM
I like the feel of this piece.
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Date: 6/10/2017 12:56:00 AM
Thank you, Richard /|\
Date: 6/9/2017 2:51:00 AM
That painting is yours too, I recognize the style :) And I love it!
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Date: 6/10/2017 12:55:00 AM
Yes, it is! Thanks, Duir /|\
Date: 6/8/2017 10:18:00 PM
Great Haiku, The Raven is also in chat!! hint hint! LOL
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Date: 6/8/2017 10:20:00 PM
Haha, coming now /|\
Date: 6/8/2017 4:17:00 PM
There has always been a mistique about the Raven for me. I enjoyed your haiku WW. : ) 7
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Date: 6/8/2017 6:17:00 PM
Yes, I agree with you! Thanks, Connie /|\
Date: 6/8/2017 9:15:00 AM
Awesome Budgie
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Date: 6/8/2017 6:14:00 PM
Thanks, Tim /|\
Date: 6/8/2017 8:21:00 AM
- Well done, W.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/8/2017 6:13:00 PM
Thank you kindly /|\
Date: 6/8/2017 7:46:00 AM
Great images. Well penned
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Date: 6/8/2017 7:53:00 AM
Thank you, Scott /|\ Enjoy your night
Date: 6/8/2017 6:37:00 AM
Really cool Rick. Mystical ink flows from your pen my friend.
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Date: 6/8/2017 6:40:00 AM
Thank you, Chris! I hope it's not too obscure /|\
Date: 6/7/2017 11:50:00 PM
nicely penned tribute to the Genesis.... loved this one...
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Date: 6/7/2017 11:59:00 PM
Thank you my friend, enjoy your day/night /|\