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Luna Moths In Mid Flight

Luna moths in mid flight
giving the world a sense of delight
they seem evermore bright

things will now be all right
I love the sense of air and light
Luna moths bring in me in the night 

I wish I may I wish I might
Live a life so nice and tight
That some day I can return so bright 

And be a luna moth in mid flight
Giving the world a sense of delight
Warming up creatures of the night

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/23/2021 2:30:00 PM

Much harmony and delight in the voice of your rhymes, Caren. Enjoyed how you weaved your words in inspiration of the monarchs. A beautiful, cheerful poem.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/23/2021 11:55:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. They are so gorgeous too!

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/23/2021 1:30:00 PM

Those are big green insects that I haven't seen in years. Along with other species, their numbers must have been decimated by overuse of pesticides. Good write.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/23/2021 11:55:00 PM

I have them in June July and August in Kansas Robert!