Luna Glory Says Goodnight! Moon

As the warm sun begins to set
Fading on the far horizon
Ole Man Moon begins his assent
Luna Glory's beauty turns on

Greeting harvest moon with Goodnight
She shines in delight with her white
In love to glow forever bright
Their relationship great delight

Lunar are you jealous my dear
Of your cousin Morning Glory
She is colorful in blue clear
You are beauty white flowery

That relationship between you
And Mr. Moon when you greet sweet
He brings out the best that is true
At night when you soulfully meet

Snuggle down between soft starlight
That blankets the sky and the ground
Softly two kiss cheek to cheek right
The reward is seedlingly on the mound
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 2:23 AM
once again excellent my friend duncan
Brown Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 5:01 AM
Congratulations on your win Sara in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Harvest Moon;P". Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest! Enjoy!! Love, Audrey
Devonshire Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 8:19 AM
Sara, Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest. Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 8:27 PM
Loved this one's personification, Sara, Congratulation in the contest.LUv, Andrea
Johnson Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 7:57 PM
Very nice Sara. Congratulaitons. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 7:49 PM
Such a charming poem, Sara....well done! Love the line snuggle down between soft starlight...just lovely!! :) ~ Carrie
Freeman Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 6:44 PM
Congratulations Sara on your worthy Rhyme presentation. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 6:01 PM
Congrats Sara on your HM in the Harvest Moon contest .. a super write and wonderful honor my friend to enjoy .. sweet success.. and blessings.. lovely lady.. with luv..
Smalling Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 1:43 PM
Two of my favorite symbols given fresh persona here, and with so much delicacy and beauty. Thank you
Devonshire Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 3:44 PM
I love the way you give human emotions to the moon and the morning glory, Sara. An excellent entry for the Harvest Moon contest! Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
Culverhouse Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 5:54 PM
pretty write mom...did you here that Jupier is closer to the earth this coming up week and should be real bright. evening it is in the west and midnight straight over head and in the morning in the east. We saw it last night in the east over your house.
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 9:47 AM
I love your metaphor in this one, Sara. the starlight being the blanket of the sky and the images of Luna and her cousin Morning Glory. HOw pretty this is. LUv, Andrea
Wilson Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 3:11 PM
Beautiful images..very nice ..Take care~Deb
Fillmore Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 11:03 AM
There is wonderful imagery in this, Sara, have enjoyed reading this today. Especially love the last two stanzas...aahh! excellent word choices.
Keys Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 9:10 AM
the visions you create are fascinating and very pleasant. well written, thank u, chuck
Roberts Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 7:07 AM
nice one Sara, good luck in the contest if it's entered
Knop Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 7:01 AM
Awesome tribute to moon and sun, Sara, enjoyed reading your poem this early afternoon!...Gert
Greene Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 6:17 AM
do yu watch bear in the big blue house?
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September 18, 2010 at 6:13 AM
Your images pour out in your lines to grab the reader....luv Michael
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