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Luna Glory Says Goodnight! Moon

As the warm sun begins to set Fading on the far horizon Ole Man Moon begins his assent Luna Glory's beauty turns on Greeting harvest moon with Goodnight She shines in delight with her white In love to glow forever bright Their relationship great delight Lunar are you jealous my dear Of your cousin Morning Glory She is colorful in blue clear You are beauty white flowery That relationship between you And Mr. Moon when you greet sweet He brings out the best that is true At night when you soulfully meet Snuggle down between soft starlight That blankets the sky and the ground Softly two kiss cheek to cheek right The reward is seedlingly on the mound

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/29/2010 2:23:00 AM
once again excellent my friend duncan
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Date: 10/4/2010 5:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sara in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Harvest Moon;P". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2010 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest! Enjoy!! Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/30/2010 8:19:00 AM
Sara, Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:27:00 PM
Loved this one's personification, Sara, Congratulation in the contest.LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/29/2010 7:57:00 PM
Very nice Sara. Congratulaitons. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/29/2010 7:49:00 PM
Such a charming poem, Sara....well done! Love the line snuggle down between soft starlight...just lovely!! :) ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/29/2010 6:44:00 PM
Congratulations Sara on your worthy Rhyme presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/29/2010 6:01:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your HM in the Harvest Moon contest .. a super write and wonderful honor my friend to enjoy .. sweet success.. and blessings.. lovely lady.. with luv..
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Date: 9/21/2010 1:43:00 PM
Two of my favorite symbols given fresh persona here, and with so much delicacy and beauty. Thank you
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Date: 9/20/2010 3:44:00 PM
I love the way you give human emotions to the moon and the morning glory, Sara. An excellent entry for the Harvest Moon contest! Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/19/2010 5:54:00 PM
pretty write mom...did you here that Jupier is closer to the earth this coming up week and should be real bright. evening it is in the west and midnight straight over head and in the morning in the east. We saw it last night in the east over your house.
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Date: 9/19/2010 9:47:00 AM
I love your metaphor in this one, Sara. the starlight being the blanket of the sky and the images of Luna and her cousin Morning Glory. HOw pretty this is. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/18/2010 3:11:00 PM
Beautiful images..very nice ..Take care~Deb
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Date: 9/18/2010 11:03:00 AM
There is wonderful imagery in this, Sara, have enjoyed reading this today. Especially love the last two stanzas...aahh! excellent word choices.
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Date: 9/18/2010 9:10:00 AM
the visions you create are fascinating and very pleasant. well written, thank u, chuck
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Date: 9/18/2010 7:07:00 AM
nice one Sara, good luck in the contest if it's entered
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Date: 9/18/2010 7:01:00 AM
Awesome tribute to moon and sun, Sara, enjoyed reading your poem this early afternoon!...Gert
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Date: 9/18/2010 6:17:00 AM
do yu watch bear in the big blue house?
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Date: 9/18/2010 6:13:00 AM
Your images pour out in your lines to grab the reader....luv Michael
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