Luna Eclispe

Day is my time
That is when I shine
Night is not my glory
When its dark that is not my story

But this night was different
On this night awe struck and reverend
The moon was full and nearly touching earth
Shining on the turf

Slowly crept the earth
Blocking the sun's worth
Slowly your full glory
Drew me into your story

I saw God in you
How his design was beyond words
No way to express
Those few moments seeing God

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/27/2019 12:36:00 AM
God in you; yeah You in God.../// great writing
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/27/2019 7:23:00 AM
Mahtab, I saw God in the moon and earth as there was a lunar eclipse. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Date: 6/30/2009 3:01:00 PM
Excellent write Sara>>James
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Date: 6/30/2009 9:49:00 AM
This is an awesome write..the creator reveals himself in some remarkable ways...good poem.
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Date: 6/30/2009 6:14:00 AM
Sara, this is an excellent poem. I truly enjoyed the read. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2009 11:16:00 AM
thanks for your kind comments on my dentist footles, I will pray for your grandson, God bless you from diane
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