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Luna Eclispe

Day is my time That is when I shine Night is not my glory When its dark that is not my story But this night was different On this night awe struck and reverend The moon was full and nearly touching earth Shining on the turf Slowly crept the earth Blocking the sun's worth Slowly your full glory Drew me into your story I saw God in you How his design was beyond words No way to express Those few moments seeing God

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/27/2019 12:36:00 AM
God in you; yeah You in God.../// great writing
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/27/2019 7:23:00 AM
Mahtab, I saw God in the moon and earth as there was a lunar eclipse. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Date: 6/30/2009 3:01:00 PM
Excellent write Sara>>James
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Date: 6/30/2009 9:49:00 AM
This is an awesome write..the creator reveals himself in some remarkable ways...good poem.
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Date: 6/30/2009 6:14:00 AM
Sara, this is an excellent poem. I truly enjoyed the read. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2009 11:16:00 AM
thanks for your kind comments on my dentist footles, I will pray for your grandson, God bless you from diane
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