Luna

nights gone by and still,
Luna laments her lost love...
tearful ocean born


**Written for Raul's Reflections contest :)

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Daver Austin

April 5, 2016 at 3:31 PM

A deep one. Love it. congrats, daver

De R

May 28, 2011 at 10:56 AM

Aww...this is so sad, but yet beautiful...we have 'luna' in Romanian for 'moon', too:) Beautiful imagery here!

Poet Destroyer A

October 11, 2010 at 4:10 PM

congratulations on this on to, enjoyed the still and silent of a sad moment,...p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

January 2, 2010 at 8:00 AM

wow, this is beautiful, Nikko. I guess you won a contest with this? I am so behind on everything here for joining only around xmas time!! congrats! andrea

Michael Jordan

December 23, 2009 at 6:58 PM

Kikko - Beautiful - A well deserved win - Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest, wonderful job with this poetic challenge – God Bless, mj

P Sheart

December 11, 2009 at 9:08 AM

Wow! This is one of the best Haiku's I've ever read. It's got me all dreamy. A magnificent entry for Raul's contest Nikko. I can see why it got first place!!Thanks for your welcome comments. Happy holidays to you and yours. Love Light Patty

Anthony Nutter

December 11, 2009 at 2:48 AM

Excellent haiku for the contest, best of luck and congratulations onbeing featured on the hot list.

Brian Strand

December 9, 2009 at 12:51 AM

Excellent Nikko.May your gifts multiply in new directions in 2010 Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commnts

Audrey Haick

December 7, 2009 at 5:08 AM

They say, "It is better late than never". So congratulations on your Ist Place win in Raul's "Reflections" Contest! Peace and love, audrey

Brandee Augustus

December 4, 2009 at 12:56 PM

Congratulations on your first palce finish in Raul's Reflection contest. I really love your second and third line. With the moon and the tides having the obvious connection, I like how you made it into a love story. Very creative write!

James Marshall Goff

December 3, 2009 at 4:29 PM

thanks for the congrats! Nikko! your haiku is memorable! jimbo

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

December 3, 2009 at 2:28 AM

Wow, Nikko! No wonder this poem won. It is exceptional! Smiles, Dane Ann

Brian Strand

December 3, 2009 at 12:37 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Nikko.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words today

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 2, 2009 at 8:58 PM

Thankxxx Nikko .. this poem is a winner and I knew it first time I read it and bingo.. it won so congrats again and thankxxx so very much for enjoying my contest winning poem too.. I was not describing my house which I do rent but lots of people always complain about landlords so I wrote a funny poem and was shocked Brian chose it for second place.. I am still in shock.. u are a dear .. keep writing more of those wonderful words.. have u entered The Deposition contest yet? blessings... luv

Marty Owens

December 2, 2009 at 8:41 PM

This is so beautiful..No wonder it took first place...Congratulations...Marty

Elaine George

December 2, 2009 at 5:28 PM

AWESOME HAIKU AND WELL DESERVED FIRST PLACE, DEAR NIKKO. Love, Lainie

John Freeman

December 2, 2009 at 4:51 PM

Awesome win, Nikko. Sincerely Moses

James Marshall Goff

December 2, 2009 at 4:43 PM

wow! Nikko! your last line is remarkable! congrats! jimbo

Robert A. Dufresne

December 2, 2009 at 4:25 PM

I never even saw this one before. No wonder you took first place with it. Beautiful. Congratulations, Nikko ! !

Juliane Thomas

December 2, 2009 at 1:43 PM

Congratulations on winning first place in Raul's contest! Beautiful haiku! ~Juliane

Audrey Haick

December 2, 2009 at 1:39 PM

Congratulations on your poem winning Ist Place in Raul's Contest! Peace and love, Audrey

Debbie Guzzi

December 2, 2009 at 11:48 AM

Great win! Congrad's Light & Love

December 2, 2009 at 9:44 AM

Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your first place finish in Raul's contest to my other comment. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen