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Luna (Five Haiku)

LUNA (five Haiku)

just a ghostly form
riding a late august sky
moon and scattered clouds

i’m all by myself
september moon shining down
bread    cheese    and red wine

laura smiles at me
clouds part and the moon peeps out
i’m falling in love

looking at the stars
clouds part and the moon peeps out
all’s right in heaven

late september moon
beauty    promises    perfume
two falling in love

bathing in moonlight
the world a sea of shadows
bread    cheese    and red wine

Copyright © Daver Austin | Year Posted 2010

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/23/2010 9:26:00 AM Good morning Daver, stopping by to say hi & see if you have anything new. I love the lunar of your haiku. Full of beauty and unexpected phenomenon, enjoyed your poem for the second time,..p.d. Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 9/6/2010 11:34:00 AM Beautiful!! Last night we decided to lay in the bed of my husbands truck and watch the stars. we had pillows and a sleeping bag...sound romantic?? would have been except there was an 11 y/o boy a dog and cat crawling on us. still was nice though. Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/5/2010 3:51:00 PM A very beautiful series of haiku that tell a romantic story. Lovely Daver...Mahalo, Connie Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 9/5/2010 6:07:00 AM Daver...the charm in this poem is warm and pleasing. Thanx for showing the readers the...genteel the lot of us 'men' do encompass, vis a vis....vipers, lol ! Beautiful poem Sir ! james Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/3/2010 11:47:00 PM I like the way some of the lines repeated, making a sequence out of haiku, Daver. Very romantic! Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/3/2010 8:04:00 AM It is a nice mulitple haikus to enjoy, daver. Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 9/2/2010 1:52:00 PM Hi Daver :) nothing like lovely Luna to play a part in love-- enjoyed reading your series of haiku here-- sure made me smile (sort of like letting me peek into that special evening) go enjoy that love now... btw just one quick typo for clouds in your 3rd haiku, 2nd line--hope this helps --btw I also have a haiku by the same title, but mine is depressing lol... nikko :) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/2/2010 12:06:00 PM wow! Daver, it is nice to see you here today, Love them all- good haiku.. Hope you are enjoying your holiday,..p.d. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/2/2010 11:01:00 AM Such a romantic write that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading your work..I know that Laura enjoyed this that was written with her in mind..Sara Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/2/2010 10:58:00 AM I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Daver. I will not be reading poetry for a few days as I will be gone from Friday until Monday. I look forward to reading more of your poetry when I return. I wish you a weekend filled with good health, love, and loads of inspiration. Love and Blessings, Carol Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/2/2010 10:29:00 AM Brilliant imagery and the haiku series form give so much power to this awesome account of an out-of-body experience, Daver! Welcome home, my friend. We have missed you here. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply