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Luna (Five Haiku)

LUNA (five Haiku) just a ghostly form riding a late august sky moon and scattered clouds i’m all by myself september moon shining down bread cheese and red wine laura smiles at me clouds part and the moon peeps out i’m falling in love looking at the stars clouds part and the moon peeps out all’s right in heaven late september moon beauty promises perfume two falling in love bathing in moonlight the world a sea of shadows bread cheese and red wine

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/23/2010 9:26:00 AM

Good morning Daver, stopping by to say hi & see if you have anything new. I love the lunar of your haiku. Full of beauty and unexpected phenomenon, enjoyed your poem for the second time,..p.d.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/6/2010 11:34:00 AM

Beautiful!! Last night we decided to lay in the bed of my husbands truck and watch the stars. we had pillows and a sleeping bag...sound romantic?? would have been except there was an 11 y/o boy a dog and cat crawling on us. still was nice though.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/5/2010 3:51:00 PM

A very beautiful series of haiku that tell a romantic story. Lovely Daver...Mahalo, Connie

James Peranteau

Date: 9/5/2010 6:07:00 AM

Daver...the charm in this poem is warm and pleasing. Thanx for showing the readers the...genteel the lot of us 'men' do encompass, vis a vis....vipers, lol ! Beautiful poem Sir ! james

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2010 11:47:00 PM

I like the way some of the lines repeated, making a sequence out of haiku, Daver. Very romantic! Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/3/2010 8:04:00 AM

It is a nice mulitple haikus to enjoy, daver.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/2/2010 1:52:00 PM

Hi Daver :) nothing like lovely Luna to play a part in love-- enjoyed reading your series of haiku here-- sure made me smile (sort of like letting me peek into that special evening) go enjoy that love now... btw just one quick typo for clouds in your 3rd haiku, 2nd line--hope this helps --btw I also have a haiku by the same title, but mine is depressing lol... nikko :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2010 12:06:00 PM

wow! Daver, it is nice to see you here today, Love them all- good haiku.. Hope you are enjoying your holiday,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/2/2010 11:01:00 AM

Such a romantic write that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading your work..I know that Laura enjoyed this that was written with her in mind..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/2/2010 10:58:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Daver. I will not be reading poetry for a few days as I will be gone from Friday until Monday. I look forward to reading more of your poetry when I return. I wish you a weekend filled with good health, love, and loads of inspiration. Love and Blessings, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/2/2010 10:29:00 AM

Brilliant imagery and the haiku series form give so much power to this awesome account of an out-of-body experience, Daver! Welcome home, my friend. We have missed you here. Love, Carolyn