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out of the book we’re all shook up space looks vibrant 28-October-2022

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Date: 10/28/2022 3:02:00 PM
You do these than-bauks so well, Seeker. I have so much trouble with them. With admiration! ~ Gershon
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Date: 10/28/2022 6:51:00 PM
I too find this form difficult, gw. The ‘trick’ I use is to configure the second line first and then envelope it with the first and third, whilst keeping what is sought to be conveyed in focus, of course..

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