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Luminous Lace

light defines
delicate fingers of frost
luminous lace

seasonshaiku

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James Fraser

February 2, 2011 at 1:22 PM

There's a wonderful beauty in this Deb, it's no surprise you won in the contest with it....:)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

January 29, 2011 at 10:31 AM

I really love how you describe it as "luminous lace" -- very creative and delicate indeed- adding this to faves :D -- nikko :)

Honesty Oimbo

January 26, 2011 at 4:44 AM

this a beautiful haiku

Robert Pettit

January 25, 2011 at 11:20 PM

You paint a pretty descriptive picture with so few words. Delightful.

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 25, 2011 at 4:16 AM

Congratulations Deb, for the win in Charles Henderson's contest "haiku vs senyru". Love, Carol

James Peranteau

January 25, 2011 at 3:35 AM

I see congratulations are in order here dear poet ! (((((claps))))) And such a visual one at that ! Great write ! much love, james

Andrea Dietrich

January 24, 2011 at 10:23 PM

wow, splendid imagery. just splendid! Congratulations, I remember this gem. LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

January 24, 2011 at 5:22 PM

lovely haiku Deb, congrats on your win in the contest

Debbie Guzzi

January 24, 2011 at 2:41 PM

sheer and lovely, my blog picture would go great with it! Congrad's LIght & Love

Nette Onclaud

January 24, 2011 at 10:22 AM

well-scribed, deb.. my best CHEES to you for a big wi in the contest! :) huggs, nette

John Freeman

January 24, 2011 at 9:40 AM

Way to go Deb, congratulations on #5, beautiful job. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

January 24, 2011 at 9:15 AM

You go, girl. Keep these great poems coming, Deb. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Kory Calhoun

January 24, 2011 at 8:50 AM

Hi Deb - - Congratulations on your WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC

Carrie Richards

January 24, 2011 at 8:21 AM

So glad to see this one in the winner's list! Hooray for you!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 24, 2011 at 6:42 AM

Congrats Deb on your super win in the haiku vs. senryu contest ... awesome win luv..

Andrea Dietrich

January 23, 2011 at 11:47 PM

This is beautiful!

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 23, 2011 at 9:23 AM

Nice observation nicely put in words, deb

Carrie Richards

January 23, 2011 at 8:28 AM

this is a beauty.....so unique!! Love the delicate nature of this one!

Michael J. Falotico

January 23, 2011 at 8:17 AM

Nice words expressed my dear Poet friend... luv Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 23, 2011 at 7:52 AM

Lovely and beautiful Haiku Deb.. glorious second line my friend and luminous lace shines bright this happy Sunday..luv..

Poet Destroyer A

January 23, 2011 at 6:49 AM

Good morning Deb, how are you... what a vivd image. Your haiku title is awesom.. sure enjoyed.. take care and have yourself a wonderful blessed Sunday,.(( soup mail))~.p.d.

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