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Lullaby Music Box

Tender aged and very afraid of the dark, Mom would comfort me with her soothing remarks, night light bright, still having fright, she invested in a lullaby music box, Lullaby lulls my grandson to sleep today, helps him fall asleep after he prays, the beautiful tune, fills his bedroom, feeling like Mom never went away. 11-2-16 Fictional & For Contest~

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Date: 11/3/2016 10:44:00 PM
Very very good mom, seriously good!
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 11/4/2016 5:08:00 AM
Thanks so much son; thought I'd think serious this time for a rhyme!:)
Date: 11/3/2016 12:26:00 PM
So sweet this is! Good luck in the contest. :)
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 11/3/2016 7:18:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi, it was hard for me to write because I usually write ones with humor in them…:)
Date: 11/2/2016 9:20:00 PM
Hi Cheryl, You have penned such a heartfelt sentimental piece. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 11/2/2016 9:28:00 PM
Thanks so much Alexis for the nice compliment & encouragement!:)

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