Ludicrous

LUDRICROUS “A dish, a bowl, a cone, a cloud?” “A cloud?” I ask. I’m clearly dreaming, once again, a craving this strong. “I’ll take them all,” I say. The angel says, “Now that’d be silly, Miss!” You’d not believe how hot it’s in my dream. I’m soaked. My tongue does fantasize this afternoon. “I’ll take vanilla topped with sliced strawberries, drizzled chocolate and whipped cream.” I’ll need a nap, but if I sleep, I’ll find myself ordering all over again. She says, “will that be a strawberry spoon, vortex or dish?” This ice cream stop is ludicrous.
6/23/2022 Contest: Ice Cream Sponsor: Julia Ward
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Date: 6/24/2022 5:52:00 AM
Your poem is a treat--alike the ice cream it describes. Any flavor, cup or cone--still delicious....awake or dreaming.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/24/2022 7:47:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay! Happy dreams!
Date: 6/24/2022 4:28:00 AM
Ice cream is adoring both wide awake and in dream, truly rudiclous. Great write, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/24/2022 7:47:00 AM
LOL…thanks! Sure is a treat!
Date: 6/24/2022 1:39:00 AM
oh give me a dish. Sounds wonderful.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/24/2022 7:48:00 AM
Thanks! Hugs! Dream away!
Date: 6/23/2022 5:59:00 PM
Now that's what I call a 'sweet dream!' This poem is a real treat, Kim. :D
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2022 8:08:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend! :)
Date: 6/23/2022 4:26:00 PM
"I’ll need a nap, but if I sleep, I’ll find myself ordering all over again." Love it! See you at Ben and Jerry's.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2022 4:45:00 PM
LOL..went to a fairly new place called Jeremiah’s Italian Ice. You can get layered cups of Italian ice and ice cream. Fun combos. Brought the grandsons. :)
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