Ludicrous

LUDRICROUS “A dish, a bowl, a cone, a cloud?” “A cloud?” I ask. I’m clearly dreaming, once again, a craving this strong. “I’ll take them all,” I say. The angel says, “Now that’d be silly, Miss!” You’d not believe how hot it’s in my dream. I’m soaked. My tongue does fantasize this afternoon. “I’ll take vanilla topped with sliced strawberries, drizzled chocolate and whipped cream.” I’ll need a nap, but if I sleep, I’ll find myself ordering all over again. She says, “will that be a strawberry spoon, vortex or dish?” This ice cream stop is ludicrous.
6/23/2022 Contest: Ice Cream Sponsor: Julia Ward
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Pandit Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 5:52 AM
Your poem is a treat--alike the ice cream it describes. Any flavor, cup or cone--still delicious....awake or dreaming.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 7:47 AM
Thanks, Vijay! Happy dreams!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 4:28 AM
Ice cream is adoring both wide awake and in dream, truly rudiclous. Great write, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 7:47 AM
LOL…thanks! Sure is a treat!
Buhagiar Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 1:39 AM
oh give me a dish. Sounds wonderful.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 7:48 AM
Thanks! Hugs! Dream away!
Buehler Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 5:59 PM
Now that's what I call a 'sweet dream!' This poem is a real treat, Kim. :D
Rodrigues Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 8:08 PM
Thank you, dear friend! :)
DiMino Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 4:26 PM
"I’ll need a nap, but if I sleep, I’ll find myself ordering all over again." Love it! See you at Ben and Jerry's.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 4:45 PM
LOL..went to a fairly new place called Jeremiah’s Italian Ice. You can get layered cups of Italian ice and ice cream. Fun combos. Brought the grandsons. :)
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