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Lucy Saves Her Dog

Two ladies brought a dog home from the vet, And told their Lucy mouse he was her pet. The dog dragged food on floors throughout the house, But did not see dear tiny Lucy mouse, Who watched the dog and loved his romping play, While biting shoes and chairs throughout the day. The ladies of the house were not too glad, And thought the happy dog was somewhat bad. They pointed to his crate and in he went. He thought that nap time always was well spent. The dreams that lived inside his doggy head Were sweeter still when laying in his bed. Our Lucy mouse peeped out behind a crack And saw her dog was snoring on his back. His black wet nose was something new to munch For hungry flies out looking for some lunch. She raced out from her hole and to the crate To save her dog before it was too late. She scampered up his leg and to his ear, Then down his snout just as the flies flew near. She watched them as they circled round his snout, Then took a mighty breath and blew it out, Which threw the flies off course and out the door, As Lucy gasped and tumbled to the floor. Her little toe was bent a little bit, But given all, she still was feeling fit. She called out, “Dog, I love you best of all!” And ran back to her hole within the wall. The ladies called their dog and up he rose, And never knew that Lucy saved his nose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/26/2016 10:05:00 PM
Linda, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/23/2016 7:03:00 AM
- Welcome with your first poems here on PoetrySoup, Linda - PoetrySoup is simply the world's best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/22/2016 12:42:00 PM
Great read Linda, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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