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Lucky White Star

I miss watching my Luck man run, Sweat glistening in the morning sun; The smell of leather in the frigid air, Tossing his head without a care; The soft sounds of the stable yard, The only place I let down my guard; Telling secrets to my horse, Just letting nature take it’s course; The confidence he gave to me, My Lucky boy, my trusty steed; He leant me courage I never had, He was always there, through good or bad; My shoulder to lean on, by best friend, He was there for me up to the end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 12/2/2010 11:46:00 AM
I wish that I could vivify my comments to you and to all better. But I end up babbling and making no sense. So, I will leave you a message today letting you know I did read your poetry and I enjoyed it. I love reading poetry and the poets here are so talented. Have a wonderful day Tirzah. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/2/2010 5:07:00 AM
Very passionate full of feelings for the best friend, Tirzah
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Date: 12/1/2010 8:13:00 PM
Sad one Tirzah..sorry for the loss of your steed my friend.. animals are so very loving and always there as your lines state.. a lovely piece ..
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Date: 12/1/2010 5:33:00 PM
beautiful, sheer elegance is this. Harry
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