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Lucille's Niche

Lucille found a sport without a single hitch A two-wheeler was definitely her niche Until she lost her balance Racing a scooter challenge And landed in a water-filled drainage ditch. Written July 14, 2022

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Ann Foster

Date: 7/15/2022 2:13:00 PM

haha... sounds like something I did on a scooter... me and the g round... close encounters... of the unfriendly kind. Well done. Great fun. Ann

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/15/2022 2:59:00 PM

I have a neighbor that rides one to and from work. He goes like the wind, but you wouldn't get me on that little thing. I'd kill myself!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/15/2022 3:49:00 AM

My mother would be rolling her eyes; her name was Lucille!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/15/2022 9:32:00 AM

Oh my. I certainly don't mean to insult your mother. Was she athletic? I just simply love the name "Lucille." I always think of Little Richard, too, when I hear it.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/14/2022 8:07:00 PM

Sounds like Lucille had better ditch her newfound niche. Smiles, Gershon

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/14/2022 8:46:00 PM

Oh, I'm reasonable sure she'll find something she can do successfully.

Michael Tor

Date: 7/14/2022 3:34:00 PM

Milton one thing about Lucille she is not afraid to engage, and try what some would call dangerous antics. Another fine example in the life of Lucille, keep them coming. Glad to hear your done with surgery and back to posting.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/14/2022 4:17:00 PM

Thanks, Michael. She is very daring, to say the least.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/14/2022 2:49:00 PM

Yikes! That will do it!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/14/2022 4:17:00 PM

Yep...it certainly will, Kim. Thank you.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/14/2022 2:01:00 PM

Lol, she's not having much luck that's for sure Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/14/2022 2:35:00 PM

Tom, I'm inclined to think that she should take up checkers! (chuckling)