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I struck the raw edges Jagged scraps my shards thunders like waves of anger on your shore breeze sighed to ride the wind sunrises past my dismay odious side of dark souvenirs blazing fade in skyline silken sun song propel blimps orthopter wings & draw dusk aches with burning shapes & endless rapturous sinew crimson philharmonic! grateful life flows beyond obvious bestowal affection in a diamond hour lucidness climbing longing velvet whispers spectrum choir
Written: July 23, 2022 A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 7/24/2022 6:38:00 AM
Colorful, lucid--your vocabulary shines my friend.
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Date: 7/23/2022 8:53:00 PM
As ever, you are at your creative best with lofty diction ! Win big dear friend !
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Date: 7/23/2022 1:47:00 PM
Wow. Well written poem Sotto :)
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