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Lucidity Shadows

I struck the raw edges Jagged scraps my shards thunders like waves of anger on your shore breeze sighed to ride the wind sunrises past my dismay odious side of dark souvenirs blazing fade in skyline silken sun song propel blimps orthopter wings & draw dusk aches with burning shapes & endless rapturous sinew crimson philharmonic! grateful life flows beyond obvious bestowal affection in a diamond hour lucidness climbing longing velvet whispers spectrum choir
Written: July 23, 2022 A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand
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Pandit Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 6:38 AM
Colorful, lucid--your vocabulary shines my friend.
George Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 8:53 PM
As ever, you are at your creative best with lofty diction ! Win big dear friend !
Sands Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 1:47 PM
Wow. Well written poem Sotto :)
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