Loyalty's Aftermath

It's a dream I never had 
A story I never read 
A choice I never made 
And a song I never sang 

It came to existence when we met 
Leaving me with no doubt about it 
With it I didn't feel upset 
I knew I had to live with it 

Time went by and we were fine 
We did everything we thought was right 
That's when I told myself you were mine 
I never thought we would have a fight 

I don't know what happened but you changed 
Forcing me to excuse you while you take calls 
I've asked so many times but you left me hanged 
I was worried more when I caught you talking to the walls 

In us you totally gave up 
Blaming me for every single mistake 
Telling me to shut up 
That you feel like throwing me in the lake 

You told me I am disgusting 
That you were better off without me 
I knew there was someone you were seeing 
Someone two times better than me 

I was a fool 
All you did was to pretend 
Acting like everything was cool 
I bet that was never what you intend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/7/2018 5:27:00 PM
Cherity, Dumelang, or Kunjaani. (Durbs guy in Virginia, say thanks for writing) You have great rhyme, and command of the language. Sorry for the situation, but seem very strong. He is wrong. Begone!
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Date: 8/8/2018 8:57:00 AM
Hey, am good thanks. I really appreciate the compliment.
Date: 8/7/2018 8:54:00 AM
Maybe there was a bird in the sky-That looked down for good reason-There was never a worm at morning dawn-Or a branch to share a song-Only a burning bridge on her side
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