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Loyalties

Carolina blue directs singing bluebell choir bringing crescendo orchestrated with gold leaves grown in field with blueberries golden rod stands firm long stems waving in the wind giving allegiance to the Carolina blue blueberries march in review For Rick Parise's "Blue and Gold" contest

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Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 4/27/2011 3:02:00 PM

Good, inventive write! Regards, Robert.

James Fraser

Date: 4/12/2011 11:29:00 AM

Many congratulation's Jimmy on your win in Rick's fine contest.....:) smiles

John Freeman

Date: 3/23/2011 8:40:00 PM

Great to see you in the top 11, Jimmy, with this worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/23/2011 8:54:00 AM

A beautiful poem, Jimmy. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 3/23/2011 6:32:00 AM

Copngrats Jimmy on your win .Enjoyed your poem---kashinath

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2011 5:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Jimmy in ^Rick Parise's contest "Blue & Gold". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2011 10:29:00 PM

This one is quite unique. Congratulations.. It's GREAT.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/22/2011 8:59:00 PM

Such a wonderful write abounding in super images. Very warm congrats for this win.

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/22/2011 4:32:00 PM

wonderful tanka Jimmy , congrats on your win in the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/22/2011 12:33:00 PM

Congrats Jimmy on your wonderful win in the blue and gold contest luv.. awesome words depicting the colors so well..enjoy..

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/22/2011 10:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poem about Carolina Blue, and it's 11th Place Win in Rick's "Blue and Gold" Contest, JAM. Love, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/22/2011 10:23:00 AM

Very creative and expressive winning work..Enjoyed reading..Congrats..Sara

Deb Wilson

Date: 3/6/2011 12:08:00 AM

Beautifully choreographed tanka Jimmy! best of luck in Rick's contest...love,Deb

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2011 6:51:00 AM

I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read Jimmy. Wishing you the very best in the contest. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/2/2011 4:13:00 PM

Beauty reigns Jimmy in this lovely Tanka.. good luck in the contest luv.. great mixture of the two colors ...

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 3/2/2011 2:00:00 PM

Hello Jimmy, Your Tanka is just beautiful. I love how it flows and how you have brought it all together Good luck in the contest and thank you for all your kind comments As Always, Shar