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Loyalties

Carolina blue
directs singing bluebell choir
bringing crescendo
orchestrated with gold leaves
grown in field with blueberries

golden rod stands firm
long stems waving in the wind
giving allegiance
to the Carolina blue
blueberries march in review

For Rick Parise's "Blue and Gold" contest

Copyright © Jimmy Anderson | Year Posted 2011

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Zzzzz Zzzzz Date: 4/27/2011 3:02:00 PM Good, inventive write! Regards, Robert. Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 4/12/2011 11:29:00 AM Many congratulation's Jimmy on your win in Rick's fine contest.....:) smiles Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 3/23/2011 8:40:00 PM Great to see you in the top 11, Jimmy, with this worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/23/2011 8:54:00 AM A beautiful poem, Jimmy. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 3/23/2011 6:32:00 AM Copngrats Jimmy on your win .Enjoyed your poem---kashinath Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/23/2011 5:01:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Jimmy in ^Rick Parise's contest "Blue & Gold". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/22/2011 10:29:00 PM This one is quite unique. Congratulations.. It's GREAT. Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 3/22/2011 8:59:00 PM Such a wonderful write abounding in super images. Very warm congrats for this win. Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 3/22/2011 4:32:00 PM wonderful tanka Jimmy , congrats on your win in the contest Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/22/2011 12:33:00 PM Congrats Jimmy on your wonderful win in the blue and gold contest luv.. awesome words depicting the colors so well..enjoy.. Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 3/22/2011 10:32:00 AM Congratulations on your wonderful poem about Carolina Blue, and it's 11th Place Win in Rick's "Blue and Gold" Contest, JAM. Love, Annalise Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/22/2011 10:23:00 AM Very creative and expressive winning work..Enjoyed reading..Congrats..Sara Login to Reply

Deb Wilson Date: 3/6/2011 12:08:00 AM Beautifully choreographed tanka Jimmy! best of luck in Rick's contest...love,Deb Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/3/2011 6:51:00 AM I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read Jimmy. Wishing you the very best in the contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/2/2011 4:13:00 PM Beauty reigns Jimmy in this lovely Tanka.. good luck in the contest luv.. great mixture of the two colors ... Login to Reply

Sharon Ruebel Date: 3/2/2011 2:00:00 PM Hello Jimmy, Your Tanka is just beautiful. I love how it flows and how you have brought it all together Good luck in the contest and thank you for all your kind comments As Always, Shar Login to Reply