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Low Notes

when low notes resting
under score responses flat
arpeggio streams 

bass fiddles around
stanzas lost in the hum strum
tune up buddy or

fade to silenced
rhythms of verse play softly
with strings of attach

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/9/2010 7:29:00 AM
wow excellent words [duncan]
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Date: 10/5/2010 8:38:00 PM
Cool haiku based on music! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/29/2010 11:17:00 AM
I am happy to be able to sit and read all the diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad your poetry was among the ones I am reading today Kristi. Love, Carol
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