Loving You Deeply

Baby whispering 
echoes a treasure softly 
sweet words lingering 
Inside silently warms one
single heart fully smitten 
sounds of waves deeply crashing
Landing on sands warm golden
deep beautiful paradise
your beauty alone babe sweet
Sunshine looking upon love
your face honey a soul shines
launches within a thousand dreams
A swan of such regal grace warm
rests her pure beautiful heart true
floating  inside clouds sparkling magic
with a jeweled gem silver lining
you 're baby cloud nine sailing blue


wrote to 5/7/5/7/7/7/7/7/7/7/8/8/8/9/9/9 syllable count left a note on cloud nine smiling a mad sort of write drawing love from the soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Viswan Bhatia Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 8:48 AM
LOVE.....love and peace to you :)) rating..
Mcdaid Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 11:06 AM
the same warmly returned
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 9:30 PM
Wonderful, Liam! Reads like a free flowing love story. I so enjoyed...love and blessings, Rhonda
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 7:45 PM
This poem is so romantic and beautiful! Awesome masterpiece! Just sparkling gold from your loving heart and soul, my dear friend, Liam. Enjoyed it all especially the last line. "you're baby cloud nine sailing blue" A 7 for you! God bless! Love and hugs! :) xxxx D.
Curtis Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 8:05 AM
This is superb Liam ! I also am unfamiliar with this form, but you sure make it work
Trifiatis Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 5:48 AM
A treasure of feelings depicted in verse supreme dear Liam!
Mcdaid Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 1:32 AM
demetrios you are so spot on dear friend i drew the feeling with the syllables heartfelt wonderful comment dear pal
Lamoureux Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 3:59 AM
I concur with Greg, beautiful. I am not familiar with the form but I very much enjoyed the poem.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 1:29 AM
you know yourself richard trying out new styles using syllables smiling wonderful comment pal heartfelt appreciated bless you
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