Loving You

Author Dana Redricks
August 1, 2017

Loving you is like a dream that came true
Loving you is like living a life in fantasy
My love for you make me feel at ease
Like a cool summer breeze,
And like fourth of July 
you really set my heart on fire
You are my one true desire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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August 13, 2017 at 7:11 PM
This is a very cool poem, nice rhyme and heart.
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