Loving You

Love is like the water that flows
from the river
Love is like the bird as it chirps 
in its morning shiver 
Love is like the rainbow 
with so many beautiful colors 
Love is like your eyes 
with a look like no other 
Love is like the flowers 
that blossom in the spring 
Love can be so magical 
never knowing what it may bring 
Love is so peaceful 
when I’m alone with you 
Love can be so true 
that you not even need a clue 
Thinking of love with a 
promise on my mind 
That I’ll be spending the rest of my life 
loving you all the time

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Date: 7/17/2020 6:33:00 AM
AMAZING! AMAZING! This goes straight to my fav. You are indeed talented and your ink is a rollon of wisdom. Great piece friend.
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Date: 5/1/2020 6:16:00 AM
Nice...the only thing different I would do...is to omit some articles, and additives, get to the object..."Love is like water"... I like you style...
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Matt Coffelt
Date: 5/1/2020 7:01:00 PM
I appreciate your input and your thoughts. I’ve been writing since I was 16 years old, now being in my 40’s I wanna take these hundreds of notebooks and do something with them. If I can make somebody’s day better by reading my work then I have done my job. As you know that we at times put our heart and soul into a piece by turning our words into something that can possibly enlighten another. Thanks
Date: 4/30/2020 11:34:00 PM
Matt, "love" your sweet romantic write, well done _Constance
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Matt Coffelt
Date: 5/1/2020 7:07:00 PM
I always am interested in your thoughts as I have always respected your opinion. Btw your last piece of work was quite intriguing as my favorite part- “as I put words to paper and paint on canvas escaping into my sublime peaceful world” my goodness I love that!! Thanks
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