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Loving Two Men

When you said goodbye And left me at the station, I tried hard to smile As I ran into his arms, Though, I will miss you, daddy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/13/2010 5:27:00 AM
Really clever poem, nice read love roger x
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Date: 5/22/2010 3:12:00 PM
A sad but also nicely penned! Keep writing and good luck for the contest...Thank you for your comment...Gert
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Date: 5/21/2010 7:32:00 PM
sad write
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Date: 5/21/2010 9:41:00 AM
Wonderful Tanka June, i like it. Good luck in Brian's contest. I think it's podium bound >> James
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Date: 5/21/2010 8:07:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest June.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/21/2010 6:08:00 AM
Nice expressions. Good luck
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