Loving Two Men

When you said goodbye
And left me at the station,
I tried hard to smile
As I ran into his arms,
Though, I will miss you, daddy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 13, 2010 at 5:27 AM
Really clever poem, nice read love roger x
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May 22, 2010 at 3:12 PM
A sad but also nicely penned! Keep writing and good luck for the contest...Thank you for your comment...Gert
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May 21, 2010 at 7:32 PM
sad write
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May 21, 2010 at 9:41 AM
Wonderful Tanka June, i like it. Good luck in Brian's contest. I think it's podium bound >> James
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May 21, 2010 at 8:07 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest June.Rgds Brian
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May 21, 2010 at 6:08 AM
Nice expressions. Good luck
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