Alicia Krumenaker Poet Blank verse

Loving Someone

Have you ever loved someone you couldn’t have
And it kills  you to see them with someone else
When they talk to you, you act as if nothing is wrong
But deep inside your crying, and your insides feel like they’re dying
You wish that they would actually take a moment and look into your eyes
And see the pain and the feelings you have for them
And maybe they would suddenly realize their feelings for you

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Joseph Spence Sr May 29, 2010 at 7:34 PM Very passionately stated! I like the flow of the words. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph

James Fraser May 28, 2010 at 1:14 PM I just had to come back to this one, it oozes so much feelings Alicia. Looking forward to your future pieces >> James

Susan Mills May 25, 2010 at 1:36 PM yes, I think I've been there but went on with life. Good poem. Thank you so much for your comment on mine. Love, Susan

James Fraser May 25, 2010 at 10:04 AM Alicia, your lovely words have probably affected so many as even as early as yesterday. It's how you manage these feelings and move on >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown May 25, 2010 at 4:54 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Alicia. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Ray Dillard May 24, 2010 at 2:23 PM Sounds like you need to ask him over for drink and dinner. It has worked before! RAY