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Loving Someone

Have you ever loved someone you couldn’t have And it kills you to see them with someone else When they talk to you, you act as if nothing is wrong But deep inside your crying, and your insides feel like they’re dying You wish that they would actually take a moment and look into your eyes And see the pain and the feelings you have for them And maybe they would suddenly realize their feelings for you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/29/2010 7:34:00 PM
Very passionately stated! I like the flow of the words. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 5/28/2010 1:14:00 PM
I just had to come back to this one, it oozes so much feelings Alicia. Looking forward to your future pieces >> James
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Date: 5/25/2010 1:36:00 PM
yes, I think I've been there but went on with life. Good poem. Thank you so much for your comment on mine. Love, Susan
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Date: 5/25/2010 10:04:00 AM
Alicia, your lovely words have probably affected so many as even as early as yesterday. It's how you manage these feelings and move on >> James
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Date: 5/25/2010 4:54:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Alicia. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2010 2:23:00 PM
Sounds like you need to ask him over for drink and dinner. It has worked before! RAY
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