Loving Nights

When the day grown weary falls asleep
      when nights dark reign has finally begun
the moments of the time we chance to keep
      are measured by two hearts that beat as one.
In each others arms we drift and sway
      floating in a rivers warm caress
our passion grows as troubles fall away
      and we're consumed by loving tenderness.
It is then to Heaven that we fly
      our minds are freed as bodies turn to fire
sinking deep within my love I hear you cry
      as I am filled, complete by your desire.

      This is the only place I long to be
      where I know sweet joy within your love for me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/30/2009 3:47:00 PM
Wonderful sonnet great passionyou have for each other! Laura :)
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Date: 1/19/2009 5:54:00 AM
Wow! Awesome Sonnet! Heavenly, loving bliss so well expressed! No doubt a big winner here! Good luck Robin! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/19/2009 3:09:00 AM
What a beautiful sonnet for your love, this kind of love is very hard to find - you are blessed. love, Kristin
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Date: 1/19/2009 12:01:00 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest Robin.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/18/2009 10:31:00 PM
Smile~And as far as Your passion filled write here dear lady~I believe that 'Any' man, after getting to know the treasures of whom "You Are" a bit, would only dream, of holding "Your Heart" within this way!!!~So, another wonderfully penned and flowing and perfect write of Yours, dear!!!~And, "My Love To You Always~And All You Love, John!"~"Sweet Dreams Priceless Robin~Bye!":)
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Date: 1/18/2009 10:22:00 PM
Smile~I love the fact; greatly so; that You leave me passages dear!!!~ And, I am so glad that things have worked out for You here~Smile~I remember when You first came here, "Precious Robin," how, You were just wanting to fit in~Smile~well You have; within a very wonderful way I believe!!!~Actually, "You" have seemed to become quite a bright light amid this place; extremely so....{Cont}
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Date: 1/18/2009 10:15:00 PM
Smile~"Hello Beautiful & Gifted & Lovely Robin!!!"~I hope that Your day was filled splendors today dear lady~ You know, I just switched over to your write here, after reading Your last comment upon my own; and, as I was looking at Your name, I realized, how sincerely much "Your Heart & Soul" has come to mean unto myself, within such a very short while!!!~ While looking upon Your name, it was almost as if, I could feel You within my own soul....{Cont}
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Date: 1/18/2009 3:40:00 PM
Kinda hopin it was inspired by something else lol. Glad you're home schweets. The comment you left cleared things up for me. It is the action, don't think Ive ever come that close to hate but you are exactly right,,its the action and effect of it. Loveudo,,laurie
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Date: 1/18/2009 3:23:00 PM
Wow...Robin, you have outdone yourself. this is beautiful, and a wonderful entry to the sonnet contest. Excellent!:) Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/18/2009 3:06:00 PM
Super cool Robin! Lovely cadence and rhyming... BRAVO!! Love and hugs, Keith
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Date: 1/18/2009 2:43:00 PM
Fantastic Sonnet Robin, I love the first couplet. I left you some soup mail...Raul
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Date: 1/18/2009 1:41:00 PM
very beautiful and sweet. John H Loving III
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Date: 1/18/2009 1:39:00 PM
What a wonderful view on love. Nice use of this challenging form. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Have a good day. Karen
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Date: 1/18/2009 10:17:00 AM
This is very good writing Robin. I love the beauty of the piece. You know I am rooting fof my poetic friend. Always a pleasure reading your work.
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Date: 1/18/2009 8:40:00 AM
very well expressed! loved it lotz*good luck in the contest! this is really good...Always Maryam
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