Loving Myself

There are many things
I wish I could change…
In the way I look
In the way I feel
Where’s the magic wand?

Mood swings supreme
Too romantic
Head in a cloud
Very intense

PASSIONATE!!!
I give all:
heart, mind, soul

No Way
I’d change…….

ME!

For Contest "Love Yourself"
Dana Smith
July 17, 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Richards Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 5:52 PM
Don't ever change YOU! Those who care want you just as you are!
Poet Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 7:47 PM
Very good approach to the theme of the contest Eileen!Enjoyed.
Manassian Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 1:01 AM
Thanks, Kash....glad you did! :)
Seal Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 2:50 PM
Mood swings lol, womans excuse for changing her mind ha ha, I just spent a few minutes trying to think what you could change and the ony thing that comes to mind is, if you slowed down a little you wouldn't make so many typo's lol. Don't even contemplate changing anything my little Desert Orchid, your wonderful as you are. Take care, Richard
Manassian Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 1:03 AM
Hmmmmmm.....I find that men are JUST as moody, but they try to cover it better. Instead of the dramatics...they become stoic. Really....talk about change of mind and fear? Men have the corner on that one. I honestly sometimes feel sorry for you guys! Muscle and prowess but weaklings when it comes to emotional strength. Ahhhhh...glad I'm woman!
Manassian Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 1:03 AM
If my typos are the only thing you could think of...I will forgive you, Richard. I will forgive....
Tacito Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 7:49 AM
Never change who you are, improve who you've already become. ;-)
Manassian Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 1:05 AM
I'm all ears......or, in this case...all eyes! ;) Please...I'm serious....Point number 1....be less emotional? Right?
Tacito Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 10:24 PM
I'll do what I can! =D
Manassian Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 11:09 AM
Give me pointers, Drake... :-D
Lamoureux Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 6:54 AM
This is just perfect!
Manassian Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 6:57 AM
Thank you, Richard. You honor me....
Sivey Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 5:56 AM
No, don't change anything about yourself because we all love you the way you are my friend! Everyone that I know here on the Soup think you are a wonderful person! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a lovely piece, such a grand poem, Great Work!!
Manassian Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 5:59 AM
Are you sure, Russell??? :) Intense people have a bad reputation...Sure, we're high maintenance, but.....we are intensely passionate, intensely loyal, intensely sweet. That makes us worth maintaining, right? ;) (Got that from a Friends episode). Thanks ever so much for the visit. Hugs
Andresen Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 4:01 AM
- You're good as you are ..... I love you! - Good luck in the contest my friend. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 1:05 AM
Ps...I love you....now, where have I heard that before? ;)
Manassian Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 5:57 AM
Anne Lise....hugs...Wish I could give you a big bear hug. Have a nice day, my dear.
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